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fredbassett December 28 2015, 15:17:05 UTC
Wow! That was an amazing chapter!

I utterly loved the description of the walk through the otherworld and the first meeting with the fae! The whole thing positively dropped menace whilst still being beautiful.

Everyone's determination really shines through, too.

Great stuff!

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knitekat December 28 2015, 17:27:21 UTC
*bows* I was concerned if the Otherworld would come over OK, but it looks as if it did.

And good to know that everyone's determination came over too.

Thanks for reading.

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goldarrow December 28 2015, 17:03:51 UTC
That was both sad and amazing.

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knitekat December 28 2015, 17:42:16 UTC
*nods* The Otherworld? As for the sad, sacrifice seems to be a main theme of the Holy Grail legend.

Thanks for reading.

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lsellersfic December 29 2015, 19:11:03 UTC
Still one part to go, and I think I specified not too angsty in the sign-up....

I love the description of the meadow and the deer though!

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knitekat December 29 2015, 22:29:07 UTC
Hope it isn't too angsty for you.

Glad the Otherworld descriptions worked OK.

Thanks for reading.

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tli January 2 2016, 13:27:42 UTC
Loved the descriptions of the otherworld and the Fae Queen. And that whole last section was fantastic! Loved the swirling POVs and their determination.

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knitekat January 2 2016, 17:56:52 UTC
Glad you liked the descriptions and the switching povs.

Thanks for reading.

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isamazed September 2 2018, 15:43:09 UTC
It’s just fabulous how you connected this fantasy setting with real scenes from the show! Now off to the showdown...

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knitekat September 2 2018, 21:47:11 UTC
Glad you liked that bit, it was a major part of the idea. Thanks for reading.

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