I utterly loved the description of the walk through the otherworld and the first meeting with the fae! The whole thing positively dropped menace whilst still being beautiful.
Loved the descriptions of the otherworld and the Fae Queen. And that whole last section was fantastic! Loved the swirling POVs and their determination.
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I utterly loved the description of the walk through the otherworld and the first meeting with the fae! The whole thing positively dropped menace whilst still being beautiful.
Everyone's determination really shines through, too.
Great stuff!
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And good to know that everyone's determination came over too.
Thanks for reading.
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Thanks for reading.
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I love the description of the meadow and the deer though!
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Glad the Otherworld descriptions worked OK.
Thanks for reading.
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Thanks for reading.
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