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Primeval Art Fic: First Meetings (5/5 - epilogue)

Jun 21, 2015 22:02

Title: First Meetings (5/5 - epilogue ( Read more... )

possibly pre-slash, om, fic, team, art prompt fic, timey-wimey, james lester, ocs, hilary becker, angst, hurt/comfort, abby maitland, danny quinn

Comments 16

lukadreaming June 21 2015, 21:37:24 UTC

LOL!!!!! Those two have snarked their way so beautifully through this story. And ooh, timey-wimey Monty! Fab.

knitekat June 21 2015, 21:52:43 UTC

Hee, glad you liked it and the boys snarking.

Had to be timey-wimey Monty.

*bows* Thanks for reading.

goldarrow June 22 2015, 02:13:15 UTC

Danny/Lester snark was delightful!

Monty being the calf - or is it rather the calf being Monty? - was absolutely perfect. :D

Well done. Loved this one.

knitekat June 22 2015, 20:18:53 UTC

Glad you liked the snark, the boys wrote themselves.

I had the idea of Monty as the calf early on, so good to know you liked it.

*blushes* Thanks for reading.

rusty_armour June 22 2015, 15:26:43 UTC

Wonderful story! :-D I really like this version of how Danny met Lester, especially as there was sexual tension/attraction from the very start. Oh, and I absolutely love the way Lester saves Monty when Monty is just a calf -- and that his attachment to woolly mammoths is because the adult Monty had just saved him from the future predator. It's delightful how things came around full circle and Lester and Monty were able to reunite. To be honest, I was almost more excited about Lester and Monty getting together than Lester and Danny! *g*

knitekat June 22 2015, 20:22:54 UTC

*blushes* Glad you liked this version of the boys meeting. They wrote themselves. Writing Monty as a calf was an early idea, so happy that it worked. Hee, Danny will be getting jealous again ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

eriah211 June 22 2015, 19:25:16 UTC

It was little Monty!!! \0/ Aaaaaaaawwwww, such a great twist ^_^

Danny being cautious? Who knew! But it's sweet that he worries about Lester regreting it all. Lovely!

This was fun, sweet and with lots of snark. Loved it! ^_^

knitekat June 22 2015, 20:37:31 UTC

Little Monty was an early idea, so good to know you liked him as a calf.

Hee, Danny and Lester were slightly shocked by that. Danny wants to be with Lester, he doesn't want to mess it up.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

nietie June 23 2015, 13:52:03 UTC

*snifffles* That was gorgeous, with great snark and promising Danny/Lester for the future.

knitekat June 23 2015, 20:14:24 UTC

*passes a tissue* and *blushes* Good to know that the snark worked. I'm sure the boys will have a very happy time together.

Thanks for reading.