Primeval Art fic: First Meetings (1/5)

[knitekat]

Title: First Meetings (1/5

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[fredbassett]

“Damn security's on a bloody tea-break again.” Lester paused as he checked the clip in his pistol. “I will be happier when Ryan and his men are back.”

LOL!!!!

Fabulous start! I love the way you write both Danny and Lester. You've got both of them absolutely perfect in this, and it's a great set up for the story. Lovely scene setting and character introduction and then a great cliffhanger!

[knitekat]

Well, their security was rubbish ;)

*bows* Good to know you like it. It had to be Danny and Lester once I had the idea. Good to know it is working and there has to be cliffies ;)

Thanks for reading and for the art prompt too.

[eriah211]

Cliffie!!! \\0//
That was a great start and Lester/Danny! One of my favourites *g*
Danny is being Danny, but Lester is not easily impressed, it's going to be very interesting to see how things develop ^_^

[knitekat]

Got to have them ;)
Glad you liked the start and the boys do spark so well of each other. Hope you like the rest of the fic.

Thanks for reading.

[lukadreaming]

Ooh, eek!

Great start. Danny is very persistent - and I could picture perfectly him and Lester sparring!

[knitekat]

Sorry ;)

Glad you liked it. I think persistence is Danny's middle name. Good to know the sparring worked between the boys.

Thanks for reading.

[goldarrow]

Love how you've drawn both Lester and Danny here.
Lester's snark and Danny's persistence are perfect.

Yipes for the cliffhanger!

[knitekat]

Good to know the boys come across OK.

Hee, you've got to have cliffies ;)

Thanks for reading.

[nietie]

Great how you described Danny's outside POV of the team.
And I love the way how he tries to get part of the team, with Lester being so Lester. Go, Danny! *g*

[knitekat]

*bows* Good to know Danny's outside POV worked.
Hee, Danny won't give up easily, not when he wants something.

Thanks for reading.