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Primeval fic: The ARC Files: The Caged Wolf

Mar 02, 2015 21:01

Title: The ARC Files: The Caged Wolf
Author: knitekat
Word Count: ~7670
Characters: James Lester, Jon Lyle (OC), Megan (OC), OCs.
Rating: 15
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: Set in my The ARC Files 'verse and prequel to my The ARC Files: The Locked Room Mystery. For my ( Read more... )

werewolf, the arc files series, mage, au, jon lyle (oc), bingo fic, fic, james lester, ocs, pre-slash, hurt/comfort

Comments 10

fififolle March 3 2015, 08:47:05 UTC

I do like mage!Lester :D And yay for Lyle.
Great action and adventure fic.

knitekat March 3 2015, 20:37:12 UTC

Lester says thanks. Lyle is happy too.

Glad you liked it and thanks for the beta and for reading.

And a very apt icon.

goldarrow March 4 2015, 05:08:41 UTC

This is a fascinating world!
I'd love to see more of it.
Mage!Lester and Wolf!Lyle are a delightful combination.

Poor little Megan with her involuntary changes made me go awwwww.

knitekat March 4 2015, 21:17:47 UTC

*bows* Good to know it works, it is an interesting world to poke ;)
Maybe... the muse came up with something in this one that needs to be resolved... ;)
Lester does make a great mage and Lyle wrote himself as a wolf in the first one.

Megan will be fine, she's a tough little weremouse.

Thanks for reading.

fredbassett March 8 2015, 16:42:10 UTC

Your world-building really is second to none. This is fabulous, with really great attention to detail all the way through, plus its a fab premise with weres being forced into illegal fights. And I think I know who's behind it. *g*

I think my favourite exchange was this one:

“Why join a military which would dismiss you for something they knew when they recruited you?” Lester replied, continuing before Lyle could answer. “To try and make a difference.”

“I joined because I liked guns and blowing things up,” Lyle remarked, startling a laugh out of Lester. “That's better.”

Utterly perfect character moment on both sides.

I really like this series.

knitekat March 8 2015, 17:41:49 UTC

*blushes and bows* Good to know the world-building is still working, its mostly done on the fly ;) I was mean to the poor were and who do you think did it?

Yay for that exchange working.

So do I. *eyes muse* And thanks for reading/commenting.

fredbassett March 8 2015, 17:47:04 UTC

I don't want to put any spoilers in comments! I;ll tell you when we email.

knitekat March 8 2015, 17:51:08 UTC

Good point.

isamazed September 19 2018, 05:57:57 UTC

Fabulous! I really enjoy this verse!

knitekat September 19 2018, 18:48:41 UTC

*bows* Thank you, I do hope to write more.