Primeval fic: Breakdown

Sep 10, 2009 02:06


Title: Breakdown

Author: knitekat

Word Count: 515

Characters: James Lester, Jenny Lewis.

Rating: 15

Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.

Warning: Hurt/comfort, angst

A/N: Part 12 of the Claiming series, sequel to Beautiful And Dangerous and continues in Safe In Your Arms. Thanks to ( Read more... )

claiming series, jenny lewis, james lester, angst, hurt/comfort, fic

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Comments 18

fififolle September 10 2009, 07:28:36 UTC
*meep*
What a good installment. *hugs them both*

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knitekat September 10 2009, 21:09:31 UTC
Thanks. Joins you in hugging them.
See, the consequences weren't that bad (eg)

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lukadreaming September 10 2009, 09:29:17 UTC
Waah! *Sniffs delicately*

This is a really harrowing installment. And Jenny is awesome -- I like the way you show her as being scared, but determined to help Lester.

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knitekat September 10 2009, 21:12:25 UTC
Passes a tissue.

Glad you think Jenny's awesome, she's about the only one with a chance of getting through to James.

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fredbassett September 10 2009, 10:04:06 UTC
Thank goodness Jenny decided to go and check on him.

Poor, poor James.

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knitekat September 10 2009, 21:13:50 UTC
Thanks, I think his earlier breakdown got her worried.

Thanks again for the beta.

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bella_farfalla September 10 2009, 14:43:46 UTC
Lester! *wibbles*

Thank goodness Jenny got there in time to stop him.

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knitekat September 10 2009, 21:16:06 UTC
Thanks, James is in a bad place right now.

Yay for Jenny, though I'm not sure how long James knelt there...

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rusty_armour September 10 2009, 16:50:34 UTC
This is very moving and heart-breaking. I'm a total sucker for h/c, so I found it very touching to see Jenny comfort Lester the way she did. I'm glad Jenny made it to Lester's flat in time and is now determined to get Lester to open up to her and get some much-needed help. I'm really looking forward to the next installment! :-)

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knitekat September 10 2009, 21:17:31 UTC
Thank you for your knd comment. Glad you liked it.
Meep, now I have to do some more research to figure out the next bit.. once RL calms down.

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