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telperion_15 April 26 2012, 21:03:38 UTC
Nice switch of Lester fpr Nick in this! And I'm very glad that Lester isn't being completely swayed by Helen's charms! :)

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knitekat April 26 2012, 21:49:58 UTC
Thanks, glad you liked it. It wasn't supposed to be Helen/Lester, but my muse had other ideas ;)

Hee, Lester's too manipulative himself to (completely) fall for Helen's charms.

Thanks for reading.

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lukadreaming April 26 2012, 21:57:42 UTC
Very neat focus setting Helen against Lester (in more ways than one!)

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knitekat April 26 2012, 22:06:04 UTC
Thanks, glad you liked them against each other *g* Lester sneaked in and demanded a role, Helen was quite happy ;)

Thanks for reading

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freddiejoey April 26 2012, 22:40:04 UTC
"Helen smiled at Lester when he walked away; at least, she did until she sensed someone watching her and switched her smile to Nick. Everything was going as she planned." - OOOOO!

Great stuff!

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knitekat April 27 2012, 19:46:50 UTC
Hee, Helen always has plans and plots ;)

Thanks, glad you liked it.

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judithjohn April 27 2012, 06:35:12 UTC
Really nice instalment. I'm looking forward to the conclusion!

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knitekat April 27 2012, 19:52:59 UTC
Glad you liked it and hope you like the conclusion. Thanks for reading.

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flaccidduck April 27 2012, 07:20:06 UTC
Exciting!

I'm wondering how it's all going to pan out!

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knitekat April 27 2012, 19:54:01 UTC
Hee, thanks.

Hope you like how it ends. Thanks for reading.

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