Fic: Silence Speaks (3/?)

[knifeedgefic]

I am trying, desperately, to get back to writing. I'm not quite ready to post more DUST yet (sorry!), but I've been poking at some other unfinished pieces and dribs and drabs to see if I can jolly my muse back into cooperating. This has been sitting around for a bit so I figure I'll post a little more of it.

Each "part" can, technically, be read as

Comments

[wickedgillie]

Loved this! (and just caught up with parts 1 & 2 since I missed them the first time around)

You really seem to have captured the essential bits of Drusilla. She is beautiful, deadly, childlike, and tragic.

[singedbylife]

Well, I agree with the comment above - you've got her spot on - I can picture the scenes and they are - I must say - rather heartbreaking. Lovely done.

[seapealsh]

Wow, you write Drusilla so well. These are very good.

[rebcake]

Oooh! The image of Dru listening to a hollowed-out, hungry shell of a Spike is striking. Is he just waiting to be filled up with the Slayer's light, all unknowing?

These are excellent additions to the tapestry you're making!

Resolutions

[spicy_vanilla91]

So I've decided to be a good reviewer today. You might actually hate me for the VERY long comment I posted in the DUST Q&A, but I'm hoping it will actually be helpful rather than long and annoying to read haha! In any case, I just read this snippets from Drusilla's POV and I have to say you are completely spot-on with her and how well you've gotten her ''voice''. I'm curious to read more of those. Do you intend to make an actual storyline out of it or will it just be little bits and pieces here and there?

In any case, thank you for sharing with us your talent. You are a pleasure to read, as always.