"Pop Music" Fan Art

[kmhirosaki]

One of my readers, a nice chap who guys by the name Blender, did me some fan art for my most recent story, "Pop Music is Not a Crime"It's not a scene from the story itself, but it does feature some of the characters. And it's a cute scene, not something you need to be afraid of looking at while you're at work (which, for a story I've written, is

Comments

[kyellgold]

Very cute pic! Though I thought Vanya was a red fox... maybe it's just the lighting in the club. :)

[renaux]

I loved that story. Sometimes, I find myself falling into the trap of wanting the sex to not happen, though, just because the character seems so against it from the beginning. Not that the yiff itself is deplorable, much the opposite, but we're kind of set up to feel for his desire to actually not give in. I guess I must be messed up when I cheer for the yiff not to happen because the character seems to not want it

[kmhirosaki]

I guess I must be messed up when I cheer for the yiff not to happen because the character seems to not want it. Oh, not at all. I always try to make my stories work so that sex happening is an organic part of the process, something that's 'supposed' to happen as opposed to something that's just tacked on

[renaux]

Sex within the confines of plot is actually the best kind in my book. I have been guilty of reading yiff stories which were yiff from start to finish with no plot, though. :-) I like both when in different moods.

Riding the village bicycle can sometimes be unnerving. I can sympathize with the character. I got that feeling from the story, that once it was private, both were into the deed. Carnal lusts are very powerful, and can overrule what we want sometimes.

Thanks for the advice on writing. If you get a moment, (lol free time? what is it and where can I download it!) let me know if you see obvious areas of improvement. I know I'll be more talkative in the future about what I like/dislike in your tales. *is trying to come out of his shell*

[renaux]

P.S. You were one my my main influences along with kyellgold to finally trying out posting my stories. So I want to sincerely thank you for that.