Voicemail

Jun 22, 2009 23:19

[After a second, someone starts speaking. She sounds shy and timid.]

Umm...This is Miranda Lotto. Uh, if you're hearing this message, that means you're trying to talk to me, but I'm not picking up. If you leave your name and message, I swear I'll try my best to get back to you.

Thanks, I guess...

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OOC breast_feeder June 24 2009, 17:12:44 UTC
Hey there! I just had a small, tiny little thing to bring up to you about your characterization of Miranda. I know you don't have a HMD post in the comm, so I hope you don't mind me bringing it here. If you would prefer to ignore this altogether, go on ahead and delete this comment.

I really just have a problem with your Miranda's personality and I feel that it might do you good to perhaps re-read certain chapters within the manga again to help you.

I feel that your characterization of Miranda is far too confident. She's a very insecure character and appears to actually be very depressed in canon. From what I remember, she's actually tried to kill herself multiple times both before and after she became an exorcist.

I think you have great potential to be a wonderful Miranda! All you need is a quick re-read of the manga and I believe you'll be set to go. Please contact me or any of your canonmates if you have any further questions on characterization. I'm certain they would love to assist you. ♥

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