Comments | kliqzangel: Life Across The Finish Line (Or J2 Does The Fast And the Furious) 4 of 5 J2, Brian/Dom

kliqzangel

Life Across The Finish Line (Or J2 Does The Fast And the Furious) 4 of 5 J2, Brian/Dom

Mar 01, 2009 15:00

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brian/dom, j2, j2fafau

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kliqzangel March 15 2009, 14:33:13 UTC

I have only seen one or two myself and the others are always SamandDean. I do have an idea for that, but I thought this would be better.

Glad you liked it.

scorp76 March 5 2009, 09:05:52 UTC

Beautiful! Awesome chapter!
I'm so glad Jensen shared so much of himself with Jared, all his worries & passions. And the sex was HOT!

Thank you so much for friending me *runs off to read chapter 5*

xxx

kliqzangel March 15 2009, 14:32:17 UTC

Glad you liked it. Jensen needed to let go.

Happy for the friend, hope you enjoyed the last chapter.

charlies_dragon March 5 2009, 23:28:42 UTC

Hi,

I've just read this far via a link on padacklesrps and would love to read ch.5, but it says I'm forbidden and don't have access to it. Would it be possible to have a look and see if there's something you can do to make it so I can read it?? Sorry for any hassle, but I really want to finish reading it.

charlies_dragon

kliqzangel March 5 2009, 23:51:10 UTC

The fifth chapter has been made public today, so you should be able to access it now! You can also find Chapter 5 on padacklesrps now.

Glad your enjoying it@!

charlies_dragon March 5 2009, 23:53:22 UTC

Thanks :) I'm off to read it now *g*

charlies_dragon

batman_mcghee March 6 2009, 06:31:29 UTC

I LOVE YOU.

wanna make a sequel for me since it was just my birthday? *smiles pretty*

kliqzangel March 15 2009, 14:28:29 UTC

HA! *g* No sequel planned, but one never knows. Took me forever to get this story written, so I would like to get some other stories and Verses worked on.

Glad you liked this though.

nsnfan March 6 2009, 07:50:07 UTC

I loved this chapter.

It was wonderful to see Jensen come to Jared and express his desire, and to explain how much and why he wants him. This was hot and I loved how much Jensen confides in Jared about what he wants from life and what he plans to do - he has already included Jared in his future without even asking Jared. Not that Jared would deny him, of course.

Loved all the babbling Jensen had going on at the breakfast.

Love Jensen and Jared as you show them here.

Thanks for writing this and sharing.

kliqzangel March 15 2009, 14:31:12 UTC

I am glad you liked that part. I was actually stuck right before I wrote that got several weeks, so I am glad it came out ok. The fact that he just believed they would be together just shows how much JAred really means to him. As if he can't imagine they won't be togheter.

Babbling!Jensen is Teh Cute! It makes me happy.

Thank you for reading! Glad you liked it!