Comments | kliqzangel: Life Across The Finish Line (Or J2 Does The Fast And the Furious) 2 of 5 J2, Brian/Dom

kliqzangel

Life Across The Finish Line (Or J2 Does The Fast And the Furious) 2 of 5 J2, Brian/Dom

Mar 01, 2009 14:57

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blackpanther07 March 2 2009, 03:29:23 UTC

Wow! Jared got 7 years for being the driver, that Judge really wanted to make an example out of him. Love the switch in Jared from nice and calm to badass with the look that he could and would kick ass if Jensen was in trouble. I am really enjoying this. Thank you. *Off for more*

kliqzangel March 2 2009, 14:09:39 UTC

HA!! Yeah I know crap about jail terms, but needed it to match Dom's tim. Which was way under what I am sure he'd get in reality! I am a sucker for aggressive Jared, so anytime I can write him I grab the chance. There's just something about a guy so mellow and happy goin' all grr and in your face that just pushes my buttons.

Glad you are enjoying it!

scorp76 March 2 2009, 19:18:07 UTC

This is a great fic, really enjoying & gutted I have to wait till tomorrow for more! I love the dynamics between the Dom, Brian & the J's.
Thanks for sharing.
x

PS. Would it be okay to friend you?

kliqzangel March 2 2009, 19:23:15 UTC

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah I love the relationship between the four men.

Friend away!

scorp76 March 2 2009, 20:39:41 UTC

Thanks Hon!
x

batman_mcghee March 3 2009, 06:07:25 UTC

omg. i am loving this so much. i will give my kidney for the entire post. sadly, i may not be able to be online for next few days because of a trip without internet... anyway to have access to the master post?

i love j2 and i love fast and furious. cant wait for the 4th movie... coming this summer with vin and paul. YAY!

kliqzangel March 4 2009, 23:44:07 UTC

I friended you yesterday, so you should have access to the whole story now. Hope you enjoy your trip.

I am very excited for the new movie too! April 3rd can't get here soon enough!

bonbonschnecke March 3 2009, 12:36:56 UTC

OMG I read the two chaps in one go....and now I am begging you....update update real soon!!! One chap per day is to slow....*LOL*
Love your fic!!!

kliqzangel March 4 2009, 23:44:56 UTC

HA! Glad you are enjoying the fic. The 4th part is up now.

nsnfan March 6 2009, 07:16:13 UTC

I like the parallel connections between Dom and Jared and between Brian and Jensen. It was good to see Dom taking care of Jared and Jared admitting that he may have overreacted. It was equally wonderful to have Jensen mention that fighting with Jared was the last thing on hins mind last night.

I liked their ride to the restaurant and in that short period how honest they were to each other. I am als glad to see that Jensen already trusts Jared with his back up :-).

Sad truth about Jared's past and how he was sent away for 7 years just for driving!

Thanks for writing this and sharing.

kliqzangel March 15 2009, 14:54:46 UTC

Brian and Dom really are in a way like parents to the J's. Dom's crack in the first part wasn't actually far off. JAred saved Dom in jail as much as Dom saved Jared. I don't think Dom will ever forget that. Nor Jared, which is why he doesn't lie to Dom, whom he knows understands him so well.

Jensen is nothing if not honest, especially with Brian whom he trusts completely. There is more than a little hero worship going on there I think.

I think the boys trust of each other is a big part of how much they each trust Brian and Dom and know how much those two trust the other.

Yeah, I know nothing about jail sentances. HA! I pretty much just went with whatever lengths would fit my storyline.