NEW FIC! Life across the Finish Line (or J2 does the Fast and the Furious) 1 of 5 J2, Brian/Dom

Mar 01, 2009 13:30

Title: Life across the Finish Line (or J2 does the Fast and the Furious ( Read more... )

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emmy_bemmy March 2 2009, 00:45:02 UTC
Well, I like this a lot. And the incorporation of a few other of my favorite characters from other shows. I look forward to see where it goes.

How come I can't access the rest of the story though? It's telling me I'm Forbidden.

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kliqzangel March 2 2009, 01:00:36 UTC
Glad you liked it so far.

The story as a whole was posted as friends only for the people on my friends list and between tomorrow and Thurday the parts will be made public one each day.

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blackpanther07 March 2 2009, 02:04:11 UTC
I love this first chapter. *off to read more*

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kliqzangel March 2 2009, 14:15:28 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it.

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nsnfan March 6 2009, 07:12:15 UTC
Hi!

This is very fascinating. While I liked the movie, I had never imagined the J2 doing this would be so much fun.

I like the character development of Dom and Brian, like the details that although he knew he was here for a different purpose, Jensen was upset about the driving competition at the beginning. I like the story line of Brian and Dom and like the background for Jared. It was interesting to see how quiet Jared was during the whole conversation between Brain and Jensen. Love how fiercely protective of Dom Jared is. Of course like that J2 are already very attracted to each other.

I came here by following the link from the j2au site.

Thanks for writing this and sharing.

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kliqzangel March 15 2009, 14:48:53 UTC
I am very glad you liked the beginning. It took forever to get it ironed out, so I am glad it worked so well for you.

Even though it is a J2 story I don't think it could exist without Brian and Dom, so I thought at the beginning it was important that they were heavily featured and their lives explained.

Wanting to win is human nature. I can't imagine not getting caught up in that situation and not beingt upset you lost. I think Jared is very intent on his desire for JEnsen in the beginning and doesn't much care about the rest as long as it gets him to Jen.

Jared's protectiveness of Dom is one of my favorite points in this. I though there really needed to be a Vincent like character in this and JAred definately fits that role.

Glad you followed and found the story!

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