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fanofsuper January 31 2008, 23:27:53 UTC
WOW, that was a great update & as promised did have a lot of info.

Glad that Jared has found his brother & that they are going into business together. Everyone else seems so happy in their relationship & even Jared is letting himself be conviced by Jensen & Mike to join them. Eveb then he is so sure that someone (probably meaning his Dad) is going to take it all away.

Good for George for showing Jared that he will be there for him. Same goes for Jensen & Mike.

By the way, the line that says " that George was made at him after all. " shouldn't that be George was mad at him......

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deanbear25 January 31 2008, 23:30:50 UTC
“I’ve never had so much before. What do I do when someone takes it all away?”

Mike shifted his gaze to look into Jensen’s eyes and didn’t have to ask to know they both would fight to make sure that didn’t happen.

Man that last part pulled at my heart strings, I was close to tears.

I really love this verse

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audeamus22 February 1 2008, 02:14:51 UTC
Seriously I am loving this 'verse!
I love how vulnerable Jared is and how sweet Mike and Jensen are to him.
And total naww to the brotherly love that you wrote in this chapter, I'm glad Jared found his brother!
I like how the relationship has now evolved. Interested in seeing how things will progress between them now, if it will be awkward or if one will be jealous of the others...
Can't wait for more! :) Very well written.

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alena2b February 1 2008, 03:25:33 UTC
i'm so enjoying this verse. poor jared is just breaking y heart and ho protective mike and jensen are.. got to love them. :))

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blackpanther07 February 1 2008, 04:49:54 UTC
An update!!! well as promised this ch. did have a lot in it, I love this series, thank you so much for the update I can't wait for more.

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