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lapdogdesign November 26 2007, 01:36:56 UTC
I don't know how I missed the first part of this 'verse, but I just read them both back to back, and I'm psyched to read more. And I really love the rest of the cast -- really inspired choices! Johnny Depp, George Eads, even Kid Rock! Awesome!

Great job!

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kliqzangel November 26 2007, 21:50:09 UTC
HEH Thanks! Glad you like the choices for the secondary characters. I was getting bored with the same like 5 characters in everything and wanted to add some new blood.

Glad you're liking it and I'm happy you found this.

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jennygeee November 26 2007, 02:48:54 UTC
I hadn't read the first part before, but now that I've read both I love them and can't wait for the next installment! I love Jared and all his insecurities and I love how Jensen and Mike are going to look after him - he so needs a friend!

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kliqzangel November 26 2007, 21:52:48 UTC
Next installment is in the works and should consist of the boys night at Johnny Bean's! *g*

Yeah I am kinda in love with this Jared, I gotta say. The whole verse was kinda inspired by Jeyhawk's Emo!Jared. Although mine isn't quite as bad off as hers.

Jensen and Mike's protectiveness will only grow as time goes by I am sure. Jared definately needs friends and people to be good to him.

Glad you liked this!

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blackpanther07 November 26 2007, 04:36:12 UTC
Thank you for the update, it's great I hope you write more soon.

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kliqzangel November 26 2007, 21:54:26 UTC
Thank you for reading! *g* And if I can find dime to write more on this soon I promise I will.

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kliqzangel November 26 2007, 21:55:25 UTC
I will definately will continue. I had to work out some beta issues, but hopefully I can get back on track now.

Glad you liked this as much as the first.

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keyweegirlie November 26 2007, 10:59:15 UTC
FINALLY!! *giggles*

This was a great update Sweetie, and one that I've been waiting for. ;)

I love how you're slowly showing just how big of a misconception Jen and Mike had about Jared. I just feel really bad that he seems just so damn sheltered and scared about everything, I just wanna hug him.

Oh!! And you added in STEVE! and George and Eric! Yay! Can't wait for the next part.

*loves*
-C-

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kliqzangel November 26 2007, 21:59:00 UTC
I know, right?????

Glad you liked it. I wrote this then rewrote it then re-re-wrote it, but finally came up with something I liked.

This Jared kinda breaks my heart, even compared to Steps Jared. He needs a lot of things. I am happy how this is turning out. I think that's why I waited so long, because I wasn't happy with the flow of the first version.

I added Steve who won't have Chris! (at least I don't think there will be Chris in this one.) So, new oportunities for him. YEAH!!

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keyweegirlie November 27 2007, 08:21:23 UTC
Well, I'm just glad that ALL the rewrites finally worked for you. ;)

I added Steve who won't have Chris! (at least I don't think there will be Chris in this one.) So, new opportunities for him. YEAH!!

You know if this wasn't going to eventually be Jen/Mike/Jared I'd say throw him together with Jared, but since I know that won't happen....what about George? That could be pretty.*lol*

*hugs*
-C-

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kliqzangel December 1 2007, 02:03:26 UTC
HEH

George is taken... or will be when Jen's brother Eric falls for him *g*

Steve... I am thinking maybe Bobby. I know... he has the drowned rat look. Or maybe Elijah. I mean, he does have those incredible blue eyes Steve seems to like. *smiles innocently*

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