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Fifth Step: To Tell Your Tale 4 of 4

May 16, 2007 22:03

Title: Fifth Step: To Tell Your Tale ( Read more... )

angst, au, mike, j2, tom, steps verse, christian

Comments 8

keyweegirlie May 17 2007, 09:41:07 UTC

Hey Sweetie...I don't really know what to say about this part...there's just so much damn pain, that it actually hurts to read it. *sighs* But at the same time is so amazing because of all the pain...

I look forward to seeing what happens next, especially with that little twist at the end. Poor Rosenbaum.

*hugs*
-C-

kliqzangel May 24 2007, 02:00:56 UTC

I know. This chapter really was hard to write, but I think things will start to look up from here.

I love mikey and I am planning on him being somewhat OC in the beginning of his appearance as a regular character here. I the look into his and Tom's night already started!

asm613 May 19 2007, 04:22:51 UTC

oops. last chapter i mentioned that it had been a month since your last update; then i found this. sorry. now it's been 3 days since your last update.

TOM MUST DIE asm613 May 19 2007, 04:52:02 UTC

Just finished reading it. Tough stuff. I would really like to see Tom get a ton of bad press because of mike calling the police on him. then smallville gets cancelled or sends clark away on a year long mission for Jor-el; so he loses the show; but the show goes on. Then i'd like to see tom die a really, really horrible death. Do you think you can arrange it? Thanks

Re: TOM MUST DIE kliqzangel May 24 2007, 01:34:08 UTC

I don't think the boys are quite finished with Ol' Tommy yet. I'm not sure quite what they have planned though. *g* I doubt Jared is gonna let him walk away from this in one piece.

lycaness July 19 2008, 20:57:52 UTC

Phew, well I'm exhausted after reading all that. I can't believe Jeff, that ass hole. What a way to put a guy down. Why do all these people think that they have the right to put someone down and rub their nose in the shit life has thrown at them and tell them it's their own fault, all the while taking something from them that would only result in pushing them further down.
The shittiest thing is that things like this really do happen and that just hurts like hell to know!
I'm really glad Mike got away from Tom, I think he could be a real help in the future with Jensen. I just hope Jensen allows it and doesn't get jealous with Jared paying attention to someone else. That's a scary thought, cause if Jensen thinks, even for a moment, that he's losing Jared's affection and love, he'll fall so damn quickly I'm not even sure Jared would be able to catch him.
*need hugs*

kliqzangel July 20 2008, 00:03:15 UTC

Yeah, this Part was exhausting.

My Daddy John issues came through with Jeff in this... SORRY JEFF!! LOL

It does seem though that once you are down, the people you need around you the least seem to be the ones you draw, especially when you're down as far as Jensen is.

It is a good thing Mike escaped. I don't know how much farther you got in this so I won't say much else on him. (Don't wanna spoil anything!) Don't worry too much about Jenny though where Mike is concerned. No matter whom else he takes on, JAred's first priority will always be JEnsen.

nsnfan May 18 2009, 08:02:22 UTC

This was a difficult chapter. I am glad Jensen was able to tell this to Jared - he just had a long string of people hurting him and he needs to come out of it so he can get what he deserves.

Good to see Mike taking a step to be free of Tom.

Thanks for writing this and sharing.