FIC: Die a Little - Day Four, HP, SS/SB, NC-17

[kleio_the_muse]

Title: Die a Little - Day Four
Author: Kleio
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: SS/SB
Summary: "I know you'll find it hard to believe" - Snape's hands travelled down Sirius' chest and stopped on his hips, pulling him closer - "but not all of us are fascinated by your posterior."
Notes: Again, I owe a mountain of gratitude to fluffyllama for the beta and to trobadora for all her

Comments

[pieslut]

I'm scared! Why is Snape such an evil, rapist bastard? I am missing something aren't I? Because what he seems to be doing to Sirius is so completely repulsive and horrible that I genuinely hate him.
Waaaaah! I don't want to hate Snape! Please tell me I'm wrong.

[kleio_the_muse]

He is a bit evil, yes, and definitely a bastard, but I hardly see him as a rapist, so you have nothing to worry about, love:)

[pieslut]

But see, I'm still worried, because I wasn't nearly as worried about him raping Sirius as I was about the other stuff. Choking someone for disobeying you? Is pure fucking evil.
So I still hope I'm missing why he's doing all this. Weh! I can't stop reading! And you've got me feeling sorry for Sirius! I don't even like him.:)

[kleio_the_muse]

I'm a few days late with this, I know and am sorry:( Somehow a bunch of mails got misplaced in a wrong folder, yours among them.

Snape has taken his revenge to the extreme, but I think he's a man of extremes in many ways, so it sort of suits him;) But I promise there'll be a lot less dying towards the end and a lot more nicer stuff:) So, if you've been reading the fic further, things have evened out a bit between those two, and will continue to do so in the last two parts:)

[a_belladonna]

It's probably just me who's very biased towards Snape, but I can't help feeling a bit sad for him, since it seems the only way he can get close to someone is by forcing them. And Sirius is just so wonderful stubborn and in denial :)

[kleio_the_muse]

I have a soft spot for poor Snape, as well, but he'll get what's coming to him in the end, I assure you:) And as for Sirius, it won't take long now for him to realise that denial is not a nice place to be;)

Hooray!

[lorelei_lee1968]

Day four!
Great!
Mmmmhhh - I just wanted to mention, that i'm from germany - which may explain my funny english... reading stories is no problem, but writing something like a review is difficult.

Nevertheless - i enjoyed this chapter very much. And i hardly can't await the next part.

Re: Hooray!

[kleio_the_muse]

Danke schön!:) Und mach die keine Gedanken - this damn language is a challenge for both of us (ich bin aus Finland). I'm just happy you like the story so far:)

[arachnethe2]

"And I would prefer it if you called me Master."

"I don't have time for your bloody domination fantasies! Look at my hands!"

Here I had to laugh. Your Severus is so desperately in want to dominate Sisius and still failing miserably. I almost feel sorry for him.

[kleio_the_muse]

Sympathy for Snape seems to going around for some reason;) Can't say I blame you, though, but I just hope I haven't made him too pathetic...

Love the icon, btw;)

[fleshdress]

Yep, still happy and still very much in love with you.

Kind of have to feel sorry for Snape, who has to have picked the worst possible candidate for a slave of any nature. And Sirius who is in complete self-denial, not to mention the fact that he's pretty substandard as a house elf.

Look foward to the next bit, and am going to spend the next five or so minutes worshipping you...

:)

[kleio_the_muse]

Thanks, love:) I'm glad you're still reading this, because I know it's a bit on the slow side. I just thought those two needed to take it slow, let things unfold gradually and not rush it too much. But in the next bit... let's just say that I finally reach the R rated level in that;)