Persona 4 Fic!

[kleine_aster]

Title: An Evening At Maryuku Striptease, August 15th 18:00.
Author: kleine_aster
Characters: Souji, Yosuke, and pretty much the entire gang.
Summary: As Souji and Yosuke get seperated from the rest of the team during a Maryuku Striptease wipeout, they are forced to face a much greater challenge than slicing shadows and defeating evil - spending actual time

Comments

[kyriesanctus]

Ahahahaha, that was brilliant. XD ♥

Ever since I started playing Yosuke I've been interested in seeing how other people write him. Fffff I really liked yours. XD Such an ass sometimes, man.

[kleine_aster]

GHDGHDGHFDGD THANK YOU ♥

I mean, he's not a full-time ass anyway, but I just really love him when he gets obnoxious. Spying on your Yosuke would be interesting. I bet he's fun to roleplay. So I'm curious, is yours an ass, too? XD

I'm glad you liked it.

[kyriesanctus]

LOL I PLAY HIM at um.. amatomnes and thetower_rpg. But I'm thinking of dropping him in Tower. XD He's not as big of a dick because he's being all leader type for Rise and Naoto. I want to make him say more asshole things, though.

I WISH I COULD REALLY GIVE YOU SOME EXAMPLES, BUT SINCE AMAT IS LOCKED, SOBB.. Um. This is his like.. Only log anywhere public, and I never finished cause I'm a dick and lost track of replies, orz.

[kleine_aster]

I ... already stalked his profile. XD That's some cute het pairings with him, too! Never though about Yosuke/Rise, but I admit I felt bad for him when he had such a crush on her and then didn't even get to put his moves on. ;D

I can see Yosuke being a good leader actually. I mean, he becomes less of an ass whenever he gets a sense of purpose. Thank you! *reads* You know, I really like the way you write, it's so lifelike and idk, I think it suits him very well.

[elisabell_angel]

"It was extremely obvious at this point that the Inaba Investigation Team was, in fact, a hormonal trainwreck." That sums it up perfectly ^_^.

This was a really impressive fic, it's nice how it actually comes through as true to the origional with the many game references. Also, everyone felt rather IC especially Yosuke (who I find many try to idealize his bad points for yaoi purposes.)

[kleine_aster]

Lol, in any case it would be brilliant if it was. I mean, they're all fifteen and facing imminent death, I'm sure that works like a charm. 8D

Yeah, I know, and I don't get it either. I'm almost always drawn to a character's more obnoxious side. I think that's what makes them believable, really.

Thank you!

[elisabell_angel]

Me too, perfect characters aren't nearly as cool.

[merlin_star]

That was most certainly a nice read. :) Haha, I love how such an ASS Yosuke can be. XD

[kleine_aster]

Thank you! Yeah, sometimes in the game, I really wanted a "punch Yosuke in the face" option. XD But that's why I love him so.

[merlin_star]

The "punch Yosuke in the face" option is when Souji gets Confused and starts to continuously attack Yosuke. :D

[kleine_aster]

Lol I didn't think of that. It must feel like therapy. XD

[ex_mesomeris920]

You get 100 points (out of 100) for perfect Yosuke-assery.

Good job. :3

[kleine_aster]

asjfshjgfjksd thank you! I just love jerkface!Yosuke to death, even though we all know he's secretly a woobie inside. XD