[FANFIC] Baby, Tell Me Why [Chapter 8]

[kleif_asu]

The most awaited update of the day O w O After spending almost a month re-writing this (the chapter was accidentally deleted after our computer crashed last month ; A ;) I finally present to you BTMY's smut-filled Chapter 8! ^-^

b>Title: Baby, Tell Me Why [Chapter 8]
Author: Syris (me~ ^_^)
Length: Chaptered
Pairing: Ohmiya <3
Rating: (varies for

Comments

Thanks for this! :)

[hiroki95]

ohisashiburi!! (｡>﹏<｡)

what is 'it'?? tell us~~!! ＼(◎o◎)／

Re: Thanks for this! :)

[kleif_asu]

*waves* ohisashiburi~! \(^o^)/

I can't tell you yet >< but I think it's more or less obvious in the chapter? (hint hint ^^)
Thank you as well for reading and commenting :D

See you on the next one~ :)

[naoki_hikari]

IT CAME OUT PERFECTTTTTT!!

Everyday huh? I wouldn't be opposed to that. No, not at all. *leer*
That is fucking hot. Sex in front of mirror and also sex toys (namely big dildo on Kazu-chan is♡♡♡).
What's more with Ohno releasing inside!!! Love b*reback!!! Yeahhhhh☆!! *peace*

Oh??
Hmm..
maybe that used condoms Nino used before?
Perhaps Ohno suspect Nino cheating on him? Although in fact it's Nino seed??
Now speaking of that.. It would be hot to have Ohno cum on Nino's body!! Or face (however bit degraded it is at first read, I would say it would make them so passionate). >~>🎵
Having you choose the sitting on lap one is great choice. I'm more for back to chest. So this and another posotion is my favourite! ^ ^/
It got the feel of I'm taking care of you!! *in many meanings lol*

Thanks!! It's been a while since you update. And this chapter???
Soooo perfect!

[kleif_asu]

Hi again~ \(^o^)/

First of all.... THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS <33 (especially this long one :) ) It gives me more inspiration to continue writing ^u^ (am I being too sappy? xDD)

I really like the idea of them fucking in front a mirror o//o and it may seem weird but I just noticed that they did that without condoms when you mentioned it o.o xDD (Tho I read scenes like this quite often in other fics so I thought it was normal omg >.< xD)

Shh.... (don't tell it yet xDD)
I think I'll use those ideas for next smut chapters or smut one-shots (omg ,that would be hot o///o) Did I already mentioned that I based that position on a penalty game Ohno and Aiba got in the Christmas SP of Shuukudai-kun? :'D

Thank you as always for reading and commenting <33
See you on the next one ~!

[br_arashi]

Sooooooooooooo hot!!!
I wonder what did Ohno notice...

[kleif_asu]

I can't tell you yet >< but I think it's more or less obvious in the chapter? (hint hint ^^)
Thank you for reading and commenting :D

See you on the next one~ :)

[asdfghjklalala]

I've been waiting for this and didn't expected something smut. Ohmygosh. This is so hot. Thanks for this ❤️❤️❤️

[kleif_asu]

I'm glad you like it ^o^
Thank you as well for reading and commenting :D

See you on the next one~ :)

[ohmiya3104]

What? What?
What did he see? I want to know ~
Their first sex was pretty HOT !!

Thanks for updating~

[kleif_asu]

I can't tell you yet >< but I think it's more or less obvious in the chapter? (hint hint ^^)
Yay~ I'm glad you liked their first ever smut scene ^o^

Thank you as well for reading and commenting :D
See you on the next one~ :)