Fiction

[klee_wyck37]

Title: Terminus
Author: Klee Wyck
Pairing: GSR
Spoilers: Season 8
Rating: M
Disclaimer: These people don't have a whole lot of fun. And they're not mine.
Summary: Because all things come to an end.

Comments

[azaleyes]

This story is fabulous thus far - I can't wait to read the rest! I'll be the first to admit, I love happy endings, but if anyone can make a break up story work, it would be you :)

Some of my favorite parts (and I had many):

It was possible, he realized then, to feel one’s heart break.

It felt like a snap, a pop, a great, wrenching pain.

It felt like he just might die from the pain.

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Because he knew it wouldn’t last, because the gift would soon stir and come to life, shake off its wrappings, his eyes raked in her appearance, filing every detail away for later.

Great Work!

[klee_wyck37]

Thank you so much. I can't wait to write the rest. Damn vacation, lol.

Thanks for quoting some lines you enjoyed -- always so helpful for a writer.

I'm also a sucker for a happy ending...so don't worry too much...sshhhh...

;)

[broken_enemy]

Klee, my love, didn't we decide to avoid the angst for my poor, fragile heart? That was sad and beautiful and I want to leave a long review but I have chickenpox and am exhausted. I will later, k? K.

Kisses,
Amisha

[klee_wyck37]

I know it hurts, and for that I apologize profusely. And you have chicken pox? You poor, poor girl! That majorly sucks! I hope you're on the mend and I hope the next two installments cheer you up ... at least a little bit.

Hugs,
Klee

[kristafied]

Oh, goodness. This is so heart-breakingly sad. Poor Grissom, I just want to hug him, and I understand why he doesn't touch her even though he wants to so desperately.