summer breezes - 2/5

Jan 22, 2012 18:05

taemin meets kibum, general, AU, 1806 words

part i | part ii | part iii

Taemin prefers the rush )

fanfiction: kpop, fanfiction: shinee, taekey

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ridiculouso_o February 3 2012, 14:02:45 UTC
no no no idk why the font was really weird but i fixed it now. it took me twenty minutes lol. LJ wylt >(

oh but taekey is cooool, you should read hipslips' taekey 8D

thank yooooou ;o; i'm glad you think it's languid, i personally thought this chapter moved annoyingly fast >_> INSERT AWWW YEAAH MINHO GIF AGAIN 8D THIS MAKES ME HAPPY :DD

cant type anything rn properLY because UGH i'm so HAPPu ajlisduhaer like really i had to collect myself rn, my fingers were just wiggling aimlessly over the keyboard in happeisnesss!!! :DDDD

I wrote the last sentence impromptu into the submission i was sending to my beta, I felt like it was fitting :DD

;AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA; DO YOU THINK SO? I REALLY HOPE SO OMGAH ;AAA;

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ridiculouso_o February 4 2012, 12:46:10 UTC
hahaha the only stylistic thing I like is having no css code for an entry after clicking on a cut but i da na how to do that :c so i just chose this layout which is pretty much the same.

omg ;; that's really dedicated of you i feel so warm ;; but next time anything like that happens with lj, you can just press ctrl + shift + = and it'll zoom in and the font will get bigger. and then ctrl + - and it'll zoom out. :3

her taekey is naisu and the middlemen-verse taekey is so unf ;;

YAY :D AWYEAHMINHO.GIF AGAIN JEJE

yeah i am, it's just i get really excited hahahahaha :DDD

HURRAY \O/ -throws confetti and sparkles-

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imvus February 6 2012, 05:25:45 UTC
I will be back tomorrow to read the rest of this story. :)

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ridiculouso_o February 6 2012, 12:04:26 UTC
YAAAY! \o/

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imvus February 6 2012, 18:37:28 UTC
I love this line:

***"I'm Kibum," cuts through his senses like cold marble and warm indigo, trustworthily blunt.***

I think it describes Key perfectly.

I understand the beauty of seeing sunrise (which I get to do when I work and it's beautiful watching the colors change and steam rising from the lake) but I would much prefer to snuggle under my comforter for a few more hours...lol. And unlike Taemin I do not appreciate waking up before my alarm clock which I do most mornings...lol

And I can so relate to Taemin's wanting to play Bach, he was may favorite to play and learn when I was growing up.

Another little gem you have here. The visuals are beautiful and it shows how much Taemin loves life.

I have some errands to run and an exam today, but I am hoping to read all of your meetings today. :)

Thanks for sharing with us.

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ridiculouso_o February 7 2012, 12:25:15 UTC
I spent a good ten minutes on that line tbh, I'm glad you think it describes him perfectly because that's what I was trying to aim for :D

this Taemin is the exact opposite of me most days, actually. I just wanted him really fresh and joyful and this happened hehe. I've actually never listened to Bach, shame on me ;~; Taemin aims high though and I know Bach is like musical genius so I stuck it in there.

thank you so much ;o;
here, have some sparkles for being so nice! :3
(っ◕ヮ◕)っ `*:;,.★ ~☆・:.,;*

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lockheat March 6 2012, 03:53:23 UTC
<> I laughed so hard! And Kibum is kinda...weird (in the good way) he sounds a bit pretentious. Nonetheless, he looks special...I don

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ridiculouso_o March 6 2012, 21:18:35 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! :D Oooh Kibum is introduced properly in the next chapter, I hope he doesn't seem pretentious then, I want to make him seem real! ^^

:D thank you :D that was my aim in this fic, to bring about something unique in each person <33

ahehuaer you flatter me ;___; I love that you like it so much, it makes my day! <3

thank you for reading and commenting so nicely!

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