Fic for prompt 7

[angelbloodyrose]

Well, I just write this AU fic for prompt 7:

Title: The Young Wizard and The Demon King
Author: 

Comments

[lenainverse]

Interesting beginning. I'm wondering where you'll go with it. ^^

As far as concrit, the one thing I can definitely say is this: I'd advise that you not put author's notes in the middle of the fic. It disrupts the flow and distracts the reader, thereby detracting from the enjoyment of the story. Author's notes work best at the end of the fic/chapter, or, if you feel that the story can't be properly read without certain information (ie, formatting), at the beginning, before you begin the chapter.

Thanks so much for posting and good luck with the next chapter!

[angelbloodyrose]

Thanks for all the tips! *gives big hug*
Next chapter I'll make sure that I'll put author notes at the end ^^
(This fic sure have lots of notes... XD)

Note: I already re-post the fic.

[vivarina]

It's interesting to see Yuuri more like the Maou rather than his usual self, I wonder if he'll be like this all the way through?

Concrit I can offer is just some language errors, but I guess your beta would fix that for you XD

[angelbloodyrose]

Thx!
"I wonder if he'll be like this all the way through" --> Well, you have to wait for the next chapter :D

Language errors.. well, English isn't my native language... So I'm glad that I have a beta-reader ^^

My beta-reader already finished her job and I already re-post the fic.

[sheinah]

Your story seems very interesting. I read the book you've mentioned about a year ago, I think, so it's easy for me to picture all the details. Excellent book, by the way. I loved it ^_^
You killed Gwendal O_o and in such a horrible manner... you sadist XD
Hmm, if I can give you an advice... you should divide your chapters into paragraphs. It'll be easier to read ;p
Oh, and one last thing : Will Yuuri always stay in Maou form, or will he sometimes switch to his gentle self? Just curious =^.^=
Good work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

[angelbloodyrose]

Argh I forgot to put character death warning again! *fix the post and then sulking in the dark corner* XDD
Well I did put a warning about graphic violence...
*sobs sobs* I'm not a sadist... I think I watch too many horror movies XDD

"you should divide your chapters into paragraphs"--> Okay. I already re-post the fic.

"I read the book you've mentioned about a year ago" --> a year ago??!! that book just published in my country tha few months ago and I just got that book 4 days ago ^^;

"Will Yuuri always stay in Maou form" --> as I said to vivarina... you have to wait for the next chapter :D

[sheinah]

Don't feel bad about forgetting the character death warning, it happens to me, too -_-;

that book just published in my country tha few months ago and I just got that book 4 days ago ^^; Really? In my country, the tird book of Bartimeus' trilogy has been published a few months ago XD

And I'll definitely wait for the next chapter :)

[eviemily]

wow!i'm starting to fall in love with this fic already!i do prefer angst and this fic is kinda different..it's interesting!good job!(can't wait for the next chapter ^^)

[angelbloodyrose]

Thx!
Oh and you do have to wait patiently for the next chapter
(yeah, I'm really a slow updater --; )