[Fic] [Round 12] Title: Twitch. Rating: PG

[mitsukiyame13]

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[starrose17]

lmao!!! Oh dear, poor Shouri, gets rid of one blond only for another to come along. XD

“Why the hell does your report consists of 10 pages, but nothing written on it except the words “I’m not gay” and something about a blond guy?!”

That line is just the best!!!!

[mitsukiyame13]

Thanks, I'm glad someone liked it. ^^

[isha_libran]

Hee. I really enjoyed this, especially this line: “Why the hell does your report consists of 10 pages, but nothing written on it except the words “I’m not gay” and something about a blond guy?!” *giggles again*

Thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed this. =) And I love your usage of the prompt!

[mitsukiyame13]

Thanks. ^^ It's an honor for me to be commented by a good writer like you. ^^

(btw, I like your writing style. Lol.)

[isha_libran]

It's an honor for me to be commented by a good writer like you.

*massive blush* Thank you! =)

[mitsukiyame13]

You're welcome ^^

[valkyrie_child]

Hey, why is the tense so rocky? Present gives way to past tense so suddenly, but is there something I'm missing out on here?

But I love this: it really made my day. Highlight: "This was exactly why I lock myself in and play video games."

Ending: sheer classic. I echo starrose17: poor guy. He's in Blond Heaven.

[mitsukiyame13]

I tried to fix them. I really did. yet I still fail miserably.

But thanks for the notice. ^^

But I love this: it really made my day. Highlight: "This was exactly why I lock myself in and play video games."

Haha. Thanks. I'm glad I made someone's day. xD

[valkyrie_child]

If you ever need help editing or a beta, I'm
your girl.

And something I forgot to mention the first time round: I really liked how you used the pronpt Murata's hair (since, as opposed to the others, blond really *wasn't* his real hair colour.)

Your icons make my day everytime I see them.

[mitsukiyame13]

Really? really?

Can you? :D xD

Um.. Can I ask you to fix my annoyingly rocky tense? ( cause really, I suck at tenses )

And thanks for the compliment, both on the fic and the icons. ^^

Did I mention your awesomeness in writing? (I just read all your fics you posted for this round's challenge. xD)

Thanks for the beta in advance ;)

[crystaltear]

Oooh, I didn't even think about Murata for this prompt. And Shouri and Murata have a weird so of connection, and I think you tapped into that the first half of the story. And of course the second half reminded me of Shouri having that picture of Wolfram in a bathing suit, heh.

T'was a fun read, thanks for sharing!

[mitsukiyame13]

Thank you ^^

[poppy_snark]

“You’re a natural blond, aren’t you?” He asked.

The stranger just nodded.

“And you’re a guy, am I right?” the stranger nodded, and Yuuri suspicious if his brother was still sane.

…

Twitch.

Oh God.

XD this bit was utter win! the whole thing is crazily original and very funny!

[mitsukiyame13]

Thank you for the very nice compliment ^^