Comments | kkm_challenge: [Fic] [Round 1] Assets and Exploitations, G

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[Fic] [Round 1] Assets and Exploitations, G

Dec 19, 2007 00:54

Author/Artist: crystaltear
Characters/Pairings: Murata, Yozak
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Any Warnings: none
Theme/Prompt being used: Round 1, 100 words

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murata, yozak, yozak/murata, challenger - crystaltear, round 001, fanfic:2007

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crystaltear December 19 2007, 06:09:41 UTC

I love thinking about the idea of these two with Murata's knowledge in the background. In my mind, it makes their interaction better, because unlike the others, Yozak isn't the most predictable "pawn." XD

Thanks for the review!

lenainverse December 19 2007, 10:33:48 UTC

This is wonderful! I really love the conflict you've shown in Murata's character, and the almost darker side of him that is bound to a duty he knows will hurt everyone. The perspective twist that last line adds is really incredible, putting a somber feeling to the piece and giving it a new dimension. Really nice drabble!

crystaltear December 20 2007, 01:16:59 UTC

Thank you!

eosrose May 6 2008, 00:22:59 UTC

Lovely. So much said, so few words.

crystaltear May 6 2008, 02:14:48 UTC

Thank you :) And icon love!