Here to help with the grammar!puffles044March 31 2010, 04:22:36 UTC
First of all... I was really shocked seeing Wolf get paired up with Adalbert and Hyscliff! But, it was a great relief seeing the last panel...
Anyways... I thought of a revision of Yuri's bubble... Though, it's not as long... (And, I'm no Beta, so hope this'll help)
Yuri:"Who's responsible for his yearly therapy now? Tell me! Tell me who's going to pay for this?!"
Though, I think that revision sucked... Oh, well, that's your choice... Am just here to offer some help... (And, thanks for congratulating me in the last round!)
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Anyways... I thought of a revision of Yuri's bubble... Though, it's not as long... (And, I'm no Beta, so hope this'll help)
Yuri:"Who's responsible for his yearly therapy now? Tell me! Tell me who's going to pay for this?!"
Though, I think that revision sucked...
Oh, well, that's your choice...
Am just here to offer some help...
(And, thanks for congratulating me in the last round!)
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Thanks! when I have time I change a little this version.
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And poor wolfram ^^; but yuuri will look after him XD
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