Comments | kkm_challenge: [Fic] [Round 4] Untitled, PG

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[Fic] [Round 4] Untitled, PG

Feb 03, 2008 13:30

Author/Artist: Crystaltear
Characters/Pairings: Dan Hiri Weller, Cheri
Word Count: 371
Rating: PG
Any Warnings: Sort of angsty?
Theme/Prompt being used: Every paragraph must end in the same word.

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cheri, round 004, dan hiri, fanfic:2008, challenger - crystaltear

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crystaltear February 4 2008, 02:47:03 UTC

Thanks. And yeah, I think that although both characters are outwardly really outgoing and happy, there have been glimpses of their solitute in the series.

mirai_chan February 3 2008, 23:01:26 UTC

Quite melancholic but lovely nonetheless. I like the ending word you chose because it contrasts the individual's outer shell. :)

crystaltear February 4 2008, 02:47:31 UTC

Thanks

valkyrie_child May 22 2008, 12:31:13 UTC

I loved how you used the prompt: Dan Hiri and Cheri captured really well: glimpses of their inner selves thrown into spotlight with magnificent skill.

crystaltear May 25 2008, 01:14:47 UTC

Thank you ^^ I wasn't very confident about this piece, so I'm glad someone enjoyed.

valkyrie_child May 25 2008, 14:02:49 UTC

You're welcome. On a personal note, it was written with flair and gusto, like you knew exactly what you were writing/doing.