Comments | kkm_challenge: [Fic] [Round 46] Naked Curry, PG

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[Fic] [Round 46] Naked Curry, PG

Oct 20, 2009 01:39

Author/Artist: seamusog
Characters/Pairings: No pairings, just Yuuri and the gang
Word Count: 1445
Rating: PG
Warnings: very slight innuendo, practically non-existent
Theme/Prompt being used: Dialogue, Sick, Tapestry, Curry, Fall
Summary: Inspired by teef_chan's entry. There's gotta be a reason why Gisela was naked in the leaves.
Author's Note: Not too sure how ( Read more... )

gisela, challenger - seamusog, fanfic:2009, yuuri, gwendal, cheri, round 046, yozak, wolfram, conrad, gunter

Comments 11

rynankh October 20 2009, 07:45:57 UTC

Waaaa!!!! I missed your writing!! ^o^
This was so hilarious and full of awesomeness, the way you write the characters is great (I've so missed your YuurixWolfram, ConradxYozak interaction) :D

And a lot of quotes were just priceless XD I don't know where to start! LOL

"AVERT YOUR EYES OR AS SHINOU IS MY WITNESS... Oh Your Majesty! Please forgive me... Aaaahhh, Gisela, stop running!"
"I still can't believe Shin Makoku's best swordsman got defeated by a needle wielded by a sick girl."
"I'm not afraid of her! I'm just-- I'm just being courteous."
"Not what he said! Not what he said!"
"Ah that? Well, let's just say that mother was very interested in ensuring her children experienced all the joys of free love. Yes, how about some warm milk."

Those were FTW! XDDDDD

seamusog October 21 2009, 01:08:10 UTC

Awww, thank you. You're making me blush.

meomnimi October 20 2009, 12:42:40 UTC

*another here that missed your writing*
I'd put out some favourite quotes but I thought it unwise to copy paste the whole story...

So, Gisela, demon of the lake region, is allergic to curry? Is it only her, or are lake demons more prone to them. On another note, Yuuri brought Curry? <- am interested in the setting you had in mind

seamusog October 21 2009, 01:10:19 UTC

Heehee, thanks.

I don't know, I really didn't think much about this one. But I saw teef_chan's drawing and her comment that it was OOC for Gisela and I thought, "maybe she ate something bad".

neocloud9 October 20 2009, 13:46:29 UTC

Gawd, I missed this fandom so much. TwT

seamusog October 21 2009, 01:11:22 UTC

I MISS IT TOO!!! I'm looking forward to the kkm_rewatch.

melusine474 October 20 2009, 19:54:59 UTC

hahaha I love it! So many amazing lines, but for some reason this was my favorite:

"Excuse me Your Majesty, I've got work to do."

"This late?"

"...grrrr..."

"You're right, you do have work to do. Good night."

XDDDD

seamusog October 21 2009, 01:13:15 UTC

Thanks. Gwendal can say so much with so little. I love how a few sentences can encapsulate Gwendal's and Yuuri's relationship.

nherizu October 22 2009, 08:31:51 UTC

That was hilarious XDD
Man, you even didn't write any descriptions nor did you write any narratives except of some short paragraphs, but you delivered the story nicely.
I laughed my head off XDD
Great job!

seamusog October 22 2009, 22:23:05 UTC

Thank you. I'm relieved that it still turned out amusing despite the requisite exposition especially since I also had to include clues on who's talking and who they're talking to.

nherizu October 23 2009, 06:20:11 UTC

Yeah sometimes i needed to re-read the sentences to catch who was talking to whom, but all in all i understood it mostly, great job ^_^