Comments | kkm_challenge: [Fic] [Round 44] Unresolved, PG

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[Fic] [Round 44] Unresolved, PG

Sep 13, 2009 20:57

Author: Reki
Characters: Gunter, Conrart
Word Cont: 252
Rating: PG-ish
Any Warnings: Spoilers for the Dai Shimaron arc (through the beginning of Season 2)
Prompt being used: Gunter, Conrad: trust

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challenger - mobiuswolf, round 044, gunter, conrad, fanfic:2009

Comments 12

jojo_kun September 14 2009, 02:50:18 UTC

Oooh bold words! So confrontational! A very interesting take on the emotional dynamics in the castle while the Maou is away. Nicely done! ^^

mobiuswolf September 14 2009, 04:24:24 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad my take on this came across well.

ladyseishou September 14 2009, 04:28:23 UTC

Yes! I wondered about this aspect of the plot myself. Thank you for this glimpse of Gunter's personality that's not often shown. It is a powerful piece of writing despite it brevity. Well done.

mobiuswolf September 14 2009, 04:38:29 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this. I have a hard time 'getting' Gunter's voice so I'm glad this portrayal works for you.

isha_libran September 14 2009, 12:11:00 UTC

Ooh, Gunter breaks out the big guns. I find it interesting that everyone shows their more ruthless sides only when Yuuri's not present.

But I must admit I was too distracted by the fact that Gunter STOLE Conrart's book! Man, that is just not done. DX

mobiuswolf September 14 2009, 16:34:46 UTC

Yes, Gunter and Conrart are especially careful around Yuuri I think.

It was either have him steal the book or throw it, and Gunter doesn't throw books. Now how will Conrart get his book back, I wonder? *eg*

isha_libran September 15 2009, 06:56:54 UTC

I think everyone's more careful around Yuuri, just because they don't want to see that heartbroken look in his eyes when/if they disappoint him. Seriously, that's like his Secret Weapon, I tell you. :P

Now how will Conrart get his book back, I wonder? *eg*

Now that's something that just begs to be written... ;)

mobiuswolf September 16 2009, 03:12:13 UTC

Agreed, disappointed Yuuri is not something any of them want to see.

Now that's something that just begs to be written... ;)
*sets bait for the elusive Gunter muse*

Thread 6

rynankh September 18 2009, 06:12:41 UTC

I always find intriguing the relationship between Gunter and Conrad, so full of shades, ups and downs, they make you doubt in some instances, how they stand with each other.

mobiuswolf September 18 2009, 19:38:20 UTC

Very true. Gunter and Conrart are the characters that I have the hardest time figuring out what they're actually thinking/feeling about a given situation, so it's even more confusing watching them together.