[Fic] [Round 38] At the Foot of the Lighthouse, PG

[lenainverse]

Title: At the Foot of the Lighthouse
Author/Artist: lenainverse
Characters/Pairings: Murata/Yuuri
Word Count: ~400
Rating: PG-ish
Warnings: Haunt made me do it.
Theme/Prompt being used: Murata

Comments

[parsnip_chan]

Y'know, it's kind of oddly disturbing reading this peace with Chopin's March Funebre playing in the background and yet it's oddly fitting.

I have a feeling Murata would be mourning the loss of the status quo and fearful of what lies ahead by acting on his own desires.

Very nicely done.

Ps. Favorite line --> His place was everywhere, and Murata’s place was in his shadow. The dark was only so shrouded because it followed the brilliance of day.

[lenainverse]

I can imagine it would be. &hearts

I think you have Murata's pegged because you know me so well. >.> *loves*

[tigersilver]

Though I ship Yuuram, that was both moving and delightfully more than possible in all contexts. I like your Murata, brooding and aware of it, and the hints of Yuuri, dear old 'naive but not entirely innocent' teenager that he is. It made me smile and consider 'other' possibilities...and was a most excellent read - good job! :)

[lenainverse]

Thank you! I have such a crazy soft spot for brooding!Murata. ^_^ I appreciate the very nice review and I'm glad you liked it!

[jojo_kun]

That was awesome, hon! You really nailed the darkness in Murata's heart, and how he weighs the consequences of his actions against his own desires. Great job! Very compelling! ^^

[lenainverse]

Thanks! <3 Me and my weird love of dark things... ^_^

[animaven]

I almost felt that Murata was a stalker. There is something a little off about his attitude, not the Ken Murata I like so much.

[lenainverse]

Stalker, no...manipulative, absolutely! ^_^ The "off-ness" in his attitude was very intentional, but I'm sorry if it didn't work for you. <3

[tigersilver]

There is that....yes. Goes somehow with the eerie flashlight image from earlier, but then again, Murata Ken is a powerful [man].

[starrose17]

Aw all sweet and brooding and lovely XD

[lenainverse]

Thank you! <3