Comments | kkm_challenge: [Fic] [Round 29] Awake, NC-17

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[Fic] [Round 29] Awake, NC-17

Feb 01, 2009 20:19

Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Pairings: Shinou/Wolfram, Yuuri/Wolfram, Shinou/Murata
Word Count: 9096
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sex, voyeurism
Theme/Prompt: Wolfram x ?

A/N: I hope this fits the prompt. My defense is that the plot is driven by/revolves around the Wolfram x Shinou...

( Awake )

murata, shinou/wolfram, challenger - melusine474, fanfic:2009, shinou/murata, yuuri, yuuri/wolfram, shinou, round 029, wolfram

Comments 25

kat8cha February 2 2009, 08:30:53 UTC

...

UNF

melusine474 February 2 2009, 14:57:13 UTC

I will interpret that as a good thing ^^;

kat8cha February 2 2009, 18:27:06 UTC

XD It was really amazing. ♥ I was speechless!

melusine474 February 3 2009, 01:57:04 UTC

*blush* thank you!

meomnimi February 2 2009, 14:24:14 UTC

*O*
I think my brain's somewhat melted from reading this. Though I know that I can still say that I like this piece. A lot.

Thanks for sharing it.

melusine474 February 2 2009, 14:59:17 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Me, I am not overly fond of it right now, but that may be because it has melted my brain, too. (I am not good with deadlines...)

meomnimi February 2 2009, 15:02:46 UTC

I do feel that the ending is kind of rushed, but so many other things in this piece made up for it. ^^

speaking of which my entry was rather rushed too... orz

melusine474 February 3 2009, 01:59:35 UTC

Heh, "rushed" is exactly the right word. In fact, I would like to change the ending before I re-post after the challenge is over. I probably won't end up doing much, because I am lazy, but-- Ideally, I would. ^^;

Anyways, thanks for commenting! <3

abydos_star February 2 2009, 18:45:16 UTC

this was amazing! i was actually searching for a Shinou/Wolfram fic.. but this was beyond my expectations.. just wow!

melusine474 February 3 2009, 02:00:31 UTC

^////^

I'm glad you like it!

seamusog February 2 2009, 20:03:45 UTC

You have killed me... Now I just need Shinou to bring me back to life *snicker*

melusine474 February 3 2009, 02:01:55 UTC

XDDDD <3

mitsu_san February 3 2009, 01:15:08 UTC

OMG..it was SO HOT.
It was so hot, I was almost drooling *_*!

Oh because of you I start to like ShinouxWolf xD, But only how you described their scenes.
So great!! *blush*

You made my day xD

melusine474 February 3 2009, 02:04:38 UTC

^////^

I am happy to make your day! And to expand your pairings? (I did that to myself with this fic... it came about because Shinou was someone I'd never paired Wolf with before...)

mitsu_san February 3 2009, 06:46:59 UTC

Could I add you as a friend ^^?

melusine474 February 3 2009, 13:48:48 UTC

Of course! *hugs*