daily dose; chapter seven

Jun 01, 2015 19:23

daily dose / chapter seven 2441w.
nc-17 (to be safe) / college!au, a hint of slice of life?
jonghyun/kibum, bff!jinki/kibum because you can never go wrong with a little jinki
in which kibum finds himself caught up in habit and maybe, just maybe, in love

one / two / three / four / five / six

By the time Kibum gets a steady hold on the reigns of his emotions, both their drinks are reduced to empty glasses on Jonghyun’s coffee table. )

*daily dose, pairing: jonghyun/kibum, !au, fanfic, group: shinee, !slice of life

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ughkibum June 1 2015, 12:17:16 UTC

This was so so cute! I'm absolutely in love with this series, thank you for writing it! :-)

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kkam_jjong June 1 2015, 16:07:56 UTC
hi! i'm really happy you're fond of it and took the time to read this far. thank you x

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ofcobalt June 1 2015, 18:30:02 UTC
im so annoying i comment always BUT!!! omg i jsut love your writing i have to say it again ;; and “You should really get back to painting. Your creative side is looking way too hard for symbolism.” lmaoooo
also i just love everything about this story every chapter leaves me wanting more rip

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kkam_jjong June 2 2015, 06:46:00 UTC
no, thank you for commenting! it's great to know people are reading what i post and what their opinions of it are. also, thanks for the compliment on my writing - this chapter felt a little more difficult to write than the rest. i'm glad you enjoyed reading through this!

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just2wings June 1 2015, 22:12:08 UTC
aweeee they're so cute!!! and that kiss was getting pretty heated (me likey) before Key bumped his head xD but i liked that that happened, makes it more real
I still love Jonghyun in this, man, he's just so smooth and genuine
This chapter was a real treat ^^ thank you!

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kkam_jjong June 2 2015, 06:49:02 UTC
thanks! yeah, kibum's definitely caving in (but really, who can resist a guy like jonghyun anyway?) haha
i'm really happy you liked this one. thank you for commenting again x

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ext_2425771 June 2 2015, 06:03:10 UTC
I definitely like this oneeeee. OMG my jongkey feels. at the end you make me wanting more of jongkey lol
Thank you for writing this :D

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kkam_jjong June 2 2015, 06:49:57 UTC
hello! it's nice to know you liked it! hopefully you feel the same about the next chapters i've yet to write. thank you for reading and commenting!

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shineeshipper08 June 2 2015, 07:08:07 UTC
I was definitely not anticipating the update to be this fast.
But I LOVE this writes regardless! I feel like I'm melting and bubbles are filling up my chest then popping in giggles and jghhgnfjdejdoee. I cannot convey the floaty/giddy high I am feeling right now *~*. Seriously, I breeze through these chapters SO easily, they never seem like they're over 1000 words.
You know you've done a good job as a writer and storyteller if ur reader (or at least me) is able to read through this seamlessly, unable to stop, and without even noticing the words go bye.
Seriously, I swear I remember seeing the scroll bar at the top of the page and only minutes later, it was at th bottom again.
MOREOVER, I LOVE your language with how you described the the kiss and how Jonghyun appeared like to Key. Also, when u wrote "littlest smile" I LOVE the use of "littlest" there, it is the PERFECT word their ohmygaht. And also that part was probably my fave :).
Love this series <3 thank u so MUCH for writing this! :)

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kkam_jjong June 2 2015, 10:27:10 UTC
hello! i'm really trying to write as much progress into the story as i can, partially because i want myself to figure out in which direction it's going and mostly because i'm worried this drive i have to revive this fic will disappear again. i want to have longer chapters from here on out, though. sometimes it feels right to end at 2000+, but i personally like reaching at least a 3000 mark.

thank you for all the praise, love - i'm really flattered! i'm thrilled that you enjoy my writing and more so, this fic and the characters in it. thank you for the lovely comment! x

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shineeshipper08 June 4 2015, 10:42:25 UTC
Let us hope this drive does not disappear then.. >.<
And, I'm definitely not complaining about these long chapters so... have them as long as you would like :D. When it comes to Jongkey , the more the merrier of course XD.
And of course, the praise is well deserved :).

Also I just noticed all the errors in my first comment... In my defense, I usually read these fics and write these comments when I'm not fully awake (early morning or late at night) so... My incoherency is partly due to that and I apologize ._.

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