Nice Surprises

Jul 31, 2011 22:02

Digging through the old writing and came across a tale I've started about a girl who turns honey into gold. Surprisingly enough, I read it and *whispers* liked it. Knock me over with a feather! Let's see how far I get before I get bogged down in trying to move people from one spot to the next. I seem to have a knack for dialog but the minute I ( Read more... )

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copper_season August 1 2011, 15:44:22 UTC
Ooh. That sounds like a great story. If you want some feedback, let me know! I'm not an editor but I love to read! LOL.

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kjpzak August 2 2011, 15:20:40 UTC
Oooo, thanks for the offer! I might take you up on that. It's only 5000 words so far and I have grandiose dreams of it being much much longer which means it will be years in the making. Unless I win the lottery and can hire a maid, chauffeur, chef, sherpa, muse...

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dianne_37 August 11 2011, 00:27:01 UTC
It's amazing when you find something you haven't touched for awhile and it's stood your personal test of time. Makes you want to continue, and this time I think you'll be able to. This might just be the story that you hold up at the end and go 'voila!'. I really hope you plug away and enjoy the journey right along with your characters.

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