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kjcp

With Cleansing Breath, Part II

Jan 17, 2007 09:09

Title: With Cleansing Breath, Part II
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: R
Type: multi-chap, angst, slash
Summary: Remus remembers the good times he had with Sirius, the days and nights they spent together in their house. But he must not forget to live in the present and will struggle to find out who he really is - this time alone without his mate ( Read more... )

angst, slash, remus/sirius, multi-chap, r

Comments 21

xrated13 January 17 2007, 18:00:04 UTC

Uh oh. DAHLIA.

But she seems nice! :) And poor Mrs. Lupin. *sigh* Awesome chapter. :)

kjcp January 17 2007, 19:02:12 UTC

No, Dahlia isn't bad at all.

hpaa January 17 2007, 18:28:05 UTC

Oh the ANGST is gonna kill me....

But what a way to die it will be :)

kjcp January 17 2007, 19:04:52 UTC

Heh, yeah, I do like the angst. But let's not forget that at some point, Sirius does come back from Azkaban. Plus, teh flashbacks haven't gotten angsty yet.

hpaa January 17 2007, 19:16:25 UTC

Plus, the flashbacks haven't gotten angsty yet.

I love Angst, it's the best genre of them all...(ok, maybe smut comes close :)) And you do such a wonderful job of it...

You have NO idea how much I am waiting for Sirius to come back...:)

kjcp January 17 2007, 20:01:41 UTC

Lol, and you only have 11 1/2 more years to wait!!

Hahahahahaha.

Actually, I plan to have him come back in Part IV or V. The parts are written out, but I haven't divided them up (like right now it's a huge story in one document) yet.

pforte January 17 2007, 19:09:27 UTC

Woot, you are fast! *coughcontrarytomecough* Excellent chapter. I don't really like Dahlia though. If Remus goes for women next he should try to find someone new. *lol* Kidding, of course. I liked it.

kjcp January 17 2007, 19:59:01 UTC

You don't like Dahlia? :( She's a very nice girl.

pforte January 17 2007, 20:29:57 UTC

She's nice but she's a little like his groupie.

kjcp January 18 2007, 00:30:26 UTC

Ohh I see. Yeah, I can see that. Really, her characterization is supposed to be that she is just a very, very nice girl.

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kjcp January 17 2007, 19:58:29 UTC

Well I don't have plans to keep Remus celebate for 12 years. Not that I'm saying he'll be with Dahlia, but he won't be alone.

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kjcp January 18 2007, 00:27:48 UTC

Yes, it is from a particular film. I'll let you guess.

Ah, you like that poem? Lewis Carroll is crazy, but I've read the Alice books and finished them.