Fic for randomicicle

[formation_akame]

Title: Blossom
Characters: Kame, Jin, Pi
Pairing: Kame/Pi, hints of Akame
Word count: 5,330
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Notes: For Randomicicle with my compliments.

Summary: His lover's strange behavior prompts Kazuya to plan a secluded vacation and prefaces a revelation.

Comments

[soucieux]

This was really superb. It was very elegant and unassuming and the voice was beautiful. The last scene with jin pulled my heartstrings. Thank you for something so lovely and bittersweet. :)

[randomicicle]

Hi, dearest anon. First, I want to apologize for only coming back here now, but the internet and rl have been ridiculous distracting lately and I wanted to read this properly, since I started it and knew it'd even demand perfect reading music (and I found it, surprisingly, in Bjork). That said, I must confess that I always take notes when I read fics so I can later properly comment on the things I liked the most, but this time, I couldn't. And not because I didn't want to, the notepad is still open and blank, but I got to engrossed in the moments you described I just couldn't stop the flow of the story for that.

I did copy this: But Jin had let him fly free as easily as a balloon escapes a child’s hand. It reminded me so much of one of my favorite Akame fics (Red balloon) and.. the metaphor is so pretty. The imagery throughout the whole fic is wonderful and there are a lot of personal weak points you attacked with pretty images and carefully crafted prose, I wanted to jump inside this dream-like world of thoughts and colorful quiet

[affor]

Dear anon, you really captured me with your writing. The flow of the story is so calm, almost dreamlike...well, changing to a little nightmarish when Pi's memory of the doll came up. The characterization of Pin's relationship is how I imagine it, too (Though Jin and Yamapi were cohorts, it was Pi’s rebellious youth that he shared with Akanishi, not, Kazuya saw now, his inner self. )

Thank you for this pretty fic!