fic for defiancebyfire

[formation_akame]

Title: 洋子
Author: isolated_killer
Pairing: Jin and Kazuya
Word count: 10,019
Rating: PG
Warnings: Extreme!AU, one of the main characters has a disability.
Notes: defiancebyfire, I hope I've managed to create something you would enjoy to read as I've never really found what your preferences are because you are as mysterious as a fangirl could ever be. I do hope you will excuse

Comments

[kirrita]

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh! Lemme be the first commenter! Lemmeeeee!!

I srsly dunno where to start! Will be back latter, coz am still incoherent now...!!

[kirrita]

Oh my, I like it a lot!
I could be quite subjective jz bcuz this is exactly my kind of fav AU ficcie! Mwahahahah
It's simple, yet it has a lil bit of everything that I like in a fic... for me every elements in this fic were on point and just right..

I love the way you described Jin at the beginning of the story, especially about his smile. I'm a certified Jin hater, but i just cant hate him whenever he smiles... T__T and my heart has officially been taken by ur Jin ToT

and i notice how u addressed Kazuya as 洋子 in the begining, and at the end of the story there was only 和也, the 洋子 who had deeply drowned and isolating himself to his own vast ocean has gone... He's no longer need water to wash away all of his misery.. becoz right now Jin will always be there by his side...

and oh my God the last part.... They didnt even need the notebook to communicate! Gosh there are still so many things i'd like to flail about.. I just dont know where to start T^T the point is I like this fic so much~ xD

[isolated_killer]

Thank you so much for reading this. I'm very happy you liked it and glad to hear smiling Jin won over your heart :D

[starg8fan_liz]

;________; beautiful, wonderful story ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ loving the end, so cute >_<♥

[isolated_killer]

Thank you so much for reading this :)

[moon_catcher]

Such a simple story and yet, the way it's written with all those words and feelings, the melancholy lingering on every line... I guess, I just let myself be drowned in the slow flow of the story and suddenly, it was over.. :(
I'm not really sure right now how you did it, or what you did, but the little magic had me glued to the words and lines, and in the back of my mind, I could really see the corner of the beach with Kazuya's home and Jin finding there his peace at the times when he needed it the most.. ♥

[isolated_killer]

Giiinaaaa *_______* Thank you for reading my fic! And lol I'm kind of glad my mess of words pulled you into the plot and made you read it xD

[wintersdancer]

Like, dad doesn’t want to share his chocolates anymore, or she is annoyed by his snoring. I’d understand, I’d give her chocolates instead of my dad, I’d even switch places with her and try sleeping with him and his loud snores.

This basically broke my heart :(

Really nice fic ♥

[isolated_killer]

Cora, thank you so very much for reading this.

Your opinion is very important to me orz *_______*

[wintersdancer]

It was a pleasure :P

so uhm, I don't get why but ok? xD

[isolated_killer]

because I love you but you don't love me back :(

[yuuki_saya]

Sweet~! ♥ It's cute and touching and light and I like thinking about this story ;)

[isolated_killer]

Thank you for reading this :D