fic for bellemelody (1/3)

Apr 13, 2012 14:27

Title: Hoshi no Miyako
Author: norilys
Pairing: Akame. Kame x OC. Yamapi x OC
Word count: 19,577 words
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: English is not my first language. First time attempting such an epic fantasy!AU fic. Difference in age between Jin and Kazuya, and I took some liberties to fix it. Also the length kind of got out of control, sorry
Notes: I wanna ( Read more... )

wc:10k-20k, +kame/other, +kame/jin, -au, k_x 2012, *pg-13

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bellemelody April 17 2012, 23:27:09 UTC
This part is absolutely wonderful! I love all the fic, but rereading about Jin with little Kame is so healing for me!!

The pictures you place on my head with such a touching phrases! I love a lot how you described Kame as a baby, so realistic all his feelings, the bitterness of the aft that his father left him and how he is cherished hope! This little Kame ! I love him so much and Jin knows so well how to find a way to a little kid heart!

This is wonderful!

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norilys June 17 2012, 14:39:36 UTC
Peri~! *glomps*

I loved writing about chibi!Kame so much!!! He definitely stole my heart, so I'm happy you liked it too..

Actually, I wanted to write so much more about this time in their lives, how the whole year went by, how Jin won his heart little by little and how their relationship got so strong Kazuya, at his short age, couldn't envision a life without Jin and viceversa.

I was so happy to write this for you! Thanks for giving me the chance to create a magical world for those two to be happily ever after ♥

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