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fic for ayuzak

Apr 09, 2011 10:09

Title: Anchors
By: juniority
Pairing: Kamenashi Kazuya/Akanishi Jin/Nishikido Ryo
Word count: 8,400
Rating: NC-17
Genre/Warnings: Slightly introspective, some romance, and a bit of fluff and humor, with one explicit sexual scene that involves a threesome.
Notes: This fanfiction takes place in the past, from approximately the summer of 2000 to the autumn of ( Read more... )

k_x 2011, *nc-17, +kame/jin/other

Comments 13

Dear Author ayuzak April 9 2011, 22:16:00 UTC

It is 6a.m.
I am a complete incoherent mess.
I want to write love notes to you forever.
The concept is A+++, the execution is A+++.
I must read this again and comment properly, I am just too overwhelmed to do that right now.

Basically you have written my ideal fic and I will be grateful forever <3
Thank you

THANK YOU

Back with improved coherence but not much ayuzak April 12 2011, 18:42:59 UTC

I've always been fascinated with stories/characters that explores OCD tendencies and therefore I was won over right from the start. What follows didn't disappoint at all, not at all.

First of all I love Jin's relationship with his mother. It was heartwarming and a little painful, the way she tries to understand her son's world but is ultimately unable to be fully engaged in it.

Then came along Ryo. *___* I love how their friendship develops and how Ryo was the one who encouraged Jin to put his unique talent to use.

Your Kame is awesome <3 Chibi Kame is hardly ever portayed to be this confident and self assured. I like it A LOT ( ... )

gyelle9 April 10 2011, 08:54:47 UTC

i loved how you described jin. beautiful. i was hesitant to read this because i can't deal with this combination. i love all three and can't bear the angst of someone losing (esp when it's ryo). thankfully no one does. unique and interesting, i enjoyed reading this.

threewalls April 10 2011, 16:06:36 UTC

I really loved reading about Jin's synaesthesia, the way he hears music in colours and pebbles and almost everything around him, and that he can express himself more naturally through dance than words-- and seeing how that affected him interacting with Ryo and Kame.

kaminikaku April 11 2011, 12:48:58 UTC

I adored the way you used the way Jin saw colours, heard sound, danced and sang to explain his worldview, it was subtle and consistent and beautiful and lovely. I really liked the way you built the relationship between Jin and Kame and Ryo, and I really enjoyed the way you allowed Jin to grow and use his talents without changing completely. I loved the way Kame and Ryo found ways to relate to him, and I loved Jin's certainty could make it work. Lovely job!

marlenem April 12 2011, 14:54:51 UTC

Wow, your Jin's pretty intense! I adored the way music was all around him - or rather, how he was able to sense the music in everything; it's like music's there in every thing and anybody's able to hear it, though only a few special people are actuall able to feel it. But I might have interpreted the fic this way because a kinda do believe that real talents, who were born to be famous musicians/photographers/painters/etc were also born to see/sense the world through eyes/ears different from a common human's. Your Jin's definitely born to be a worldwide superstar and from what you shared with us about him, I DO belive that he'd make it if you were to continue this fic ( ... )