"My Beautiful One" [7]

[kiyei]

Title: My Beautiful One (CH.7)
Rating: R (Excessive gore and sexual situations)
Pairing: Onho, others by chapter
Notes: Some (read: JILLIAN) of you hated the outcome last chapter, others of you didn’t seem to mind. Overall, everything made me either lol or get warm fuzzies. Or both. But I’m glad you guys are still reading xD I’m sorry for the wait. I

Comments

[lady_hanaka]

I just discovered this fic a few minutes ago ad I would like to squeal like a fangirl for a while, but I'll keep the incoherent babbling to a minimum.

I love Jonghyun. He's an amazingly fucked up little monster. A nice contrast to Minho and Key.

The dynamics between the characters is well done, and their interactions and thoughts are insightful and entertaining. I'm thoroughly enjoying the read.

My favorite line is probably YOU PEEKED written on the window in blood. >.> I don't know why, but it's morbid and commical at the same time and something a batshit insane monster would probably write. Jonghyun's character is providing me with endless amusement, even when it shouldn't.

I look forward to the next update. :D

[kiyei]

LOL. Please squeal all you'd like. It makes me feel good about myself X)

I'm so glad you like Jonghyun ♥ I was shooting to make him the sadistic, psychotic on an unhealthy level one, and it's nice to know that I accomplished that :D

Thanks so much for the feedback, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :]

[astormisbrewing]

YOU PEEKED.

:D:

I . . . I love this story, but time spent spazzing about how much I love this story is taking away from my word count for tonight. NaNaNaNaNaNaNaNaNoWriMo . . .

BUT OMG. YOU PEEKED. You know what would freak Jinki out more? If Jonghyun used text talk and misspelled it. Nothing gets under a Librarian's skin more.

A stupid psychopath that somehow evades the cops would make him feel SO very safe, I'm sure.

I love this story.

[kiyei]

I'M SORRY LOL ;__; Gogogo, write, spazz later xD

lmao, omg "U PEAKD"

I think Jinki would have just bashed his head in until he fell unconscious.

Thank you for reading. I'm thrilled that you love it X]

[astormisbrewing]

It is now the perfect way to freak out my roommates. All that fake blood on sale after halloween? Yeah.

[kiyei]

GENIUS

[civilized_era]

I found this story via your tumblr, and I just want to say: oh my god. First of all, I am a huge, HUGE sucker for Onho, for Minkey, and for horror/psychological thrillers, so this is just pushing all the right buttons to begin with. But the story itself -- I literally found myself leaning forward/closer to my computer screen as I read, as if somehow that would allow me to devour (hah) everything faster.

Your Onew is just so wonderfully Onew, eccentric and self-aware and endearingly adorable, but also adult-like -- I love that. I love his utter bewilderment to Minho's strange, cat-and-mouse romancing (the fear-as-a-door metaphor slayed me, I thought it was perfect for the fic) -- which is totally within his rights; looking forward to the coup de grace, but considering how things have gone so far, perhaps I should be dreading it...

The Minkey relationship is fascinating; totally intrigued by hints of their backstory. Even more curious about the Jongkey relationship. And Taemin is so, so cute <3 I also love how every detail provided

[kiyei]

;haei;aliugwoh this just made me explode with happiness.

It's awesome to know I'm creating that kind of draw for people. I don't write many things like this, so to be told I'm getting that kind of reaction is just... instant glee. Onho is like, my closet OTP, lmao. There's a severe lack of it in the fandom though :( which is why it needed to be written, keke.

I'm so glad I'm doing well with Onew. I'm always paranoid about capturing characters correctly xD

Thank you sooo so much for this comment. I love thought out responses like this ♥ It really made my night. :)

[vipjuly]

o i c not leaving me a spot huh
BITCH

at least these vampires are ugly when they're pissed
i'd much rather that than ethereal beauty that is unfathomable at all times even when they're killing
now that i've left an intelligible comment

lol irl at "you peeked" you're such a troll why is jonghyun always our victim i can't even
i love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ♥

[kiyei]

Bitch you hated on dis u don get a spot this chapter O:< Next one lol sry ♥

I prefer the Nosferatu style vamps to the "I'M PRETTY TEEHEE *SPARKLE*" vampires. Like I told you, I was trying to fit the classic vampire and not the storybook one xD So... yeah, these mofo's be mean and ugly.

ROFL h8 u I was trying to make the "You Peeked" twisted. But I guess I giggle now that I read it again xD Forever trolling Jonghyun.

I love you toooooo ♥

[banana_toffee]

YOU PEEKED
omg Jonghyun how could you?
I read all chapters in one go. I like the characters and I'm very interested in what's going to happen next. <3

[kiyei]

lol Jonghyun is my little creepshow for this story X) ♥

All in one go huh? o o Wow, thank you XD I'm glad you've enjoyed it all so far, hehe.