"My Beautiful One" [5]

Oct 16, 2010 20:30

Title: My Beautiful One (CH.5)
Rating: PG-13. Still. This will change eventually Pairing: Onho, others by chapter
Notes: I got behind - sorry ;__; Work and such. I feel kind of like I forced this one, so if it seems… off… that’s why :\ In this chapter: THEY FINALLY GET SOMEWHERE. (and yes there is a very light dusting of 2min because my life is ( Read more... )

onho, shinee, famfiction, minho, onew, taemin

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anapp October 17 2010, 18:34:42 UTC
Ohohoho~ we're still in the dark but something is happening now.
And LMAO, Taemin is such scaredy cat when it comes to bugs. were you inspired by the spider you found in your bedroom? lololol /reader from tumblr/

Minho~ damn, I would be scared and frustrated if he appeared and left like that :/

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kiyei October 17 2010, 21:53:32 UTC
LOL I didn't even think about the spider I found. It was less intimidating because it was dead :(

Everything will be revealed next chapter \o/ since I've danced around it long enough I think rofl

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vipjuly October 18 2010, 02:09:53 UTC
OOOooOooOoooOOOOOoo
i don't get the hint :(
/lame
but yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ehehehehehehehehehehe baw the 2min.
maybe onew was like "BAW HE COULD BE THE SECOND PARENT TO MY PRECIOUS CHILD" or smth idek buck enjoyed the story too ^^

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kiyei October 18 2010, 02:53:24 UTC
lol it's okay it was subtle... ish

:|

On2min?

SCREAMING.

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solacem October 20 2010, 21:47:32 UTC
LAWLZ, THAT DUMB BITCH, SHE'S FROM HIS ENGLISH CLASS AND SHE CAN'T SPELL? LOLOLOL she better run seriously e_e
I'm stilling laughing.
ur hare is so prity.
LOL Taemin has a rabbit? She's talking about Onew *nods*
xD I'm a dork.

AWWWW, the 2min.
Minho, BE TAEMIN'S SECOND APPA.
Onew wants. *nods*
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
YAYYYY~ KISSY KISSY.
Onwards I strive.

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kiyei October 20 2010, 22:02:00 UTC
HENCE JINKI'S RAGE. He's going to shove an english book up her ass if he stumbles across her D:< lmao I didn't even make the hare/bunny/Onew connection. Nice catch xD

2MIN IS RELEVANT TO LIFE
onew does want. he just wont admit it O:

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7nyy October 25 2010, 02:47:49 UTC
the 2min was cute,
but I'm honewholic XDD
I love the end of chapters.
I wait for the next

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a_life_defiant November 8 2010, 10:38:24 UTC
EEEEEE!! Nice job inviting the creeper to stay for dinner Minnie! LOL Such a polite boy....

OMG, the kiss. *haz no words*

and 2Min! *sighs happily* Taemin wantz anothurr daddy? ahahhahah XD

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