Nothing else matters Chapter eight: Comfortably Numb

May 16, 2007 15:25

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lovexdeanxfaith May 19 2007, 18:41:33 UTC
GREAT ENDING! I was like omg when Foster came to the door and Faith saw Kakistos! i was like oh s***

This gots to be my fav part though:

“Hey Faith,” Dean said out loud to the empty cabin. “Guess what? I really did love you back then, sweetheart."

and with all the stuff that went on with Foster and Faith not knowing who she really was anymore...it made alot of sense with how she felt her first time around in Sunnydale! well to me anyway!

Sad that its over, but i absoutly loved it!

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kiwikatipo May 19 2007, 21:27:16 UTC
Thank you for all your lovely encouraging reviews throughout this story.

I am so thrilled you found the part where Faith looked out her window creepy.

And I'm also delighted you feel the story made sense as to why Faith behaved the way she did in Sunnydale. Because no one is born 'evil' or a 'slut' (I hate it when women get called sluts)and I think a lot of horrible things would have happened to a seventeen girl (however street smart she was to begin with), with no family or money trying to make it in a hurry from one side of the U.S. to the other.

But the story told, Faith and Dean both go back to their separate adult lives because realistically they can't do anything else.

I am working on a part two to this story where they meet again. So their potential love story is not over yet or their lies.

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lovexdeanxfaith May 22 2007, 02:19:02 UTC
Yeah I hate when girls get called sluts too!...It just made so much sense with the ending and how Faith became who she was! i loved how you did that because its just so so much sense! i loved it! and the ending was so sad, but hey its how it really would have happened! and I'm syked that you're gonna make a part 2 to this!I can't wait to see what these two have up their sleaves!! esp cause these two are the awesome-est characters! lol!

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sanaazzy May 20 2007, 18:29:33 UTC
I really enjoyed that..kinda sad how it ended though.

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kiwikatipo May 20 2007, 21:13:04 UTC
Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it and also glad you found the ending sad because I wanted it to be kind of bittersweet. But I am writing a part two so maybe there's hope for those two crazy kids yet.

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