Comments | kitzinkx: oneshot; kyuhyun/heechul; greetings, bohemia

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oneshot; kyuhyun/heechul; greetings, bohemia

Mar 16, 2010 16:22

greetings, bohemia
kyuhyun/heechul; pg-13
Kyuhyun’s life is set in stone until he gets dumped in front of a bar.
♣4,291 words

( To get to it you had to go up a flight of narrow stairs which could hardly fit one person going one way, the walls were made of old brick and one had to press hands against them to keep from falling on steps that were barely half a foot thick. )

!challenge, pairing: kyuhyun/heechul, *oneshot, fandom: super junior

Comments 11

seneferia March 16 2010, 21:22:58 UTC

Kyuhyun realized that Heechul had a soft heart, too. It was just hidden underneath layers of sarcasm and bitterness.
Just like every New Yorker, really.

I kind of went HEY! at this line then I had to nod cause its pretty much true lol. This was an interesting pairing and having Geunsuk in it is wonderful. Really good.

kitkii March 16 2010, 23:03:38 UTC

aw your icon is so adorable ♥

thank you so much, lol i tried to get it right? /fails. i'm glad you like it, thanks for reading!

xsharetheworld March 20 2010, 06:51:14 UTC

my icon feels like it belongs... minus pigbunny. :)

kitkii March 20 2010, 06:58:10 UTC

huhuhu, it does indeed ♥

ficcy March 17 2010, 14:50:22 UTC

ROFL. I love it so hard and Geunsuk is so ridiculously adorable here. XD
Well, I'm glad boy can finally dream. :) Everyone deserves it.
“Look you idiot, you have the worth of a spilled drink and a wasted cigarette to me. Don’t ruin things for yourself by opening your pathetic mouth.”
I love this line. I like it that you wrote their story in New York AU. :D

kitkii March 17 2010, 15:57:06 UTC

thank you so much! and i'm glad you liked it :D

I have a weird obsession with both Geunsuk and New York, lol

theblobmaster March 19 2010, 22:44:07 UTC

So I know this was posted some days ago and everything.. But you seriously saved my fic addiction ! I've been craving for a new KyuChul fic for ageees! They are my OTP and there's just not enough fics with them!!

And GeunSuk fitted in just perfectly and everything about this fic is adorable and just everything a KyuChul fic should be !

And I love you for writing it, thank you so much ! Now I will stop rambling and ad it to my memories ^^

kitkii March 20 2010, 06:55:23 UTC

aw i'm really glad you liked it so much! i kind of figured everyone forgot about this, so i was surprised to see a comment lol. thank you darling♥

xsharetheworld March 20 2010, 06:53:05 UTC

Now for a proper comment. This was wonderful, it really was. :)

I think this is the only KyuChul I've ever read but it was amazing. ^^

“Hello Mr. Cho, since you abandoned your socially lacking son on my doorstep, I’ve taken him under my wing and fucked him silly, so now you can’t have him back, okay?”
I stared at it for a while until the laughter just burst out of me. lol

kitkii March 20 2010, 06:56:37 UTC

i'm afraid i probably haven't done this pairing justice, but thank you for your high opinion! ♥

i'm glad you liked that line, lol. i wasn't sure what to make him say other than 'kay, he needs to say something unexpected.'

xsharetheworld March 20 2010, 15:16:59 UTC

lol You definitely did it justice bby. Never fear. ^^

That line was perfect, I believe. :D