Better Days

Jul 01, 2009 03:56

Title: Better Days
Fandom: DC
Pairings: Bruce/Clark
Characters: Clark Kent/Superman, Bruce Wayne/Batman
Word Count: 398
Rating: PG
Warnings: Death-Fic.

Yeah, I went there.

Written fotr Shuffle B Challenge. Challenge credit goes to the lovely mithen ^-^

Better Days )

drabbles, clark/bruce, slash, challenges

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ctbn60 July 1 2009, 12:19:57 UTC
*sniffle* I remember why I don't read death fic. This was wonderfully done! Very sad and painful.

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kittymayhem July 1 2009, 17:37:56 UTC
*hands her a tissue*

I don't write death fics very often, cause I rip my own heart out while I'm writing them. :(

But...at least they're together. ^-^ A silver lining despite the loss.

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skund July 1 2009, 14:12:34 UTC
D: That's so sad, but very sweet in its own way too.

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kittymayhem July 1 2009, 17:41:52 UTC
*nods* Something tells me that Bruce would not know how to handle the death of Superman.

Hell, I wouldn't know how to handle the death of superman! or Clark!!

So...it was only fair to let them live peacefully in the afterlife. They've done enough for the world. ^-^

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northern_star July 1 2009, 14:51:03 UTC
*cries* noooooo! :(

Wonderful work - but darn this is heartbreaking!

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kittymayhem July 1 2009, 17:47:47 UTC
*hands her a box of kleenex*

Sorry! Sorry!

Um, if it helps, it broke my heart thinking about it! Writing it was a different story...

I think they deserved a break. So I gave them one...just not in the *alive* sense. ^-^ I'm sure their legacy will live on in those who loved them. Like us.

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bradygirl_12 July 1 2009, 17:29:06 UTC
Ooh, this is so sad, but so well-done, Kitty! Bruce's pain is so real and the description of it devastating as he clutches the red cape. His memories of Clark are so true, a savior who loved this planet.

The ending was sad for those left behind, but happy for the World's Finest. *sniffles*

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kittymayhem July 1 2009, 17:54:00 UTC
Would you believe me if i said I saw this in my head, and my heart clenched like the fist on that cape? D:

Jeez, it was hard to write for a moment.

*hands her a tissue* Sorry about the sadness! And like you said, sad for those left behind, and a happy end for the World's Finest. They deserve it after everything they've done for the world. ^-^

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bradygirl_12 July 1 2009, 18:16:19 UTC
Yeah, deathfic is tricky to write. It tears at you, and is tough for your readers as well.

Most of the time I seem to kill off Dick, but I've done it to Clark. ;)

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gpmanda July 2 2009, 07:59:45 UTC
Superman...dead and Bruce dying of heartbreak because of it...*sniffle* Damn my inablity to cry *sniffle* This was insane on the sad scale yet at the same time sweet and all around beautiful.

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kittymayhem July 2 2009, 13:25:19 UTC
Well, you have to devour the sour part of it in order to get to the sweeter side of anything.

The boys have been through so much, so it was only fair that I kept them together...even though they left the world they knew behind.

I don't think I could have kept them apart. ^-^

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