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kittymayhem

The ONE

Jun 30, 2009 15:21

Title: The ONE (8/12)
Fandom: DCU (mostly) Slight crossover with Marvel
Pairings: Clark/Lois, Bruce/OC, John/Wally others implied
Characters: Clark Kent/Superman, Bruce Wayne/Batman with appearances from various people
Word Count: 4,745
Rating: This chapter: PG-15?? Language...
Warnings: Alcohol consumption, Angst. (what more do you want?) oh, some SAP ( Read more... )

superman/batman, the_one, wip, clark/bruce, slash, crossovers, john/wally

Comments 5

ctbn60 July 1 2009, 03:03:13 UTC

Wow what an action packed chapter. This was exciting on so many levels. You have so much going on and I am able to follow it really easily and keep focused on the story. It's so well written. Nicely done. I'm not too sure what Clark is going to do to Bruce once he shows up. I can't wait to find out!

kittymayhem July 1 2009, 03:20:43 UTC

*grins*

Action packed chapters take a lot of work. It's one of the reasons it took so long to post it! :D But at least that part is done!

Its the next part that's gonna kill me. Oi, more fighting. ^-^ I think I might blast the Joker.

As for Clark dealing with Bruce when he shows up...Eh, who knows. I don't think he'll be pleased...

^-^ Thanks for reading and commenting!! It makes it easier to keep writing this!

anonymous July 2 2009, 04:55:50 UTC

New chapter. Yes! New review (kinda).

"The ONE (7/12)"

Normally I wouldn't notice but isn't that the same as the previous chapter?

" “Clark! Are you okay?!”

Clark grunted as he sat up, rubbing his head of the ringing he heard. “I’m fine, Batman,” he said pressing his fingers to his ear piece, “but I think we stumbled across a problem….”"

Oooooo. Concern.

"His next shot vaporized that staff, and allowed Clark a moment to breath correctly before beating the crap out of Killer Croc."

Ooooo. Nightwing and Cyclops to the rescue. And I think: breath = breathe. Easily done.

"He didn’t know that it was coming, and ignoring his injuries as he climbed into the seat of the Batmobile."

Bruce?!? It is him isn't it. Silly man. Wait Poison Ivy was around? 'Cos hee if she has a certain substance and uses it...

"Does ANYONE remember Static?"

I've heard of him.

"Will there be more sex?!"

I'm looking forward to any between you know which ones. ;-)

Angeloz

northern_star July 17 2009, 21:49:03 UTC

Dunno how I managed to this one when you posted it. /feels awful. :(

Lots of great action in this - really liked it! Loved the parts with Robin and Nightwing, especially. I'm sure you're surprised. lol!

/off to read part 2!

(can I nitpick for a sec? Remi Lebleu should be "Remy LeBeau", and I think that Qui should have been a "Oui" - sowwies... it's the Frenchie thing, ya know?)

kittymayhem July 17 2009, 21:56:46 UTC

Noooo! No! No feel awful!! *hugs* I think I posted it...I don't remember when I posted it!! XD But...yeah...um, okay.

*gives up trying to remember* Whatevah!! lol

Tried to showcase everyone at least once or twice in each chapter. ^-^ So many heroes! So much action! SO wishing that the ninth chapter was already written so I can post it already! XD

Oh, Feel freeeee to nitpick. ^-^ What better source is there for a french speech that someone who speaks it day in and day out?! LOL Will change in a few! ^-^

Glad you enjoyed!!