The ONE

Jun 18, 2009 03:37

Title: The ONE (7/12)
Fandom: DCU (mostly) Slight crossover with Marvel
Pairings: Clark/Lois, Bruce/OC, John/Wally others implied
Characters: Clark Kent/Superman, Bruce Wayne/Batman with appearances from various people
Word Count: 4,211
Rating: This chapter: NC-17 for the SMEX at the end.
Warnings: Alcohol consumption, Angst. (what more do you want?) oh ( Read more... )

superman/batman, the_one, wip, clark/bruce, slash, crossovers, john/wally

Leave a comment

Comments 6

ctbn60 June 18 2009, 14:18:55 UTC
Whoa! So Lois knew about Bruces feelings all along! AND She asked him to stay away! Oh lord. I didn't see that coming. I feel bad for her that she feels she broke superman. So many people seem to take advantage of his good trusting nature without really meaning to I think.

John's advice was good. Go slow. I'm worried that they might not listen though. *g* Hm, what does he mean “Hopefully…it won’t be like last time.”? What happened last time? It does not sound good.

Ohhhh nice kiss! I was hoping they would.

Wow something delightfully sexy about Clark in black!!! Poor Bruce being left out of the fun I feel sorry for him.

ROFL at the web cam incident!! Tony is flexible huh? And steve is well endowed. Lucky Tony!! This was a GREAT chapter!!! Looking forward to the weekend and the next post!

Reply

kittymayhem June 19 2009, 16:17:48 UTC
*smiles* Oh yah. She knew. It really wouldn't make sense for her to slap him before without proper reason. I'll probably write about that later when things have calmed down a bit in their little hectic world.

John is a good sensible man...and they will "go slow" for the sake of my sanity! Oh, and I'll go into further detail about "last time" in another chapter. Don't worry, it's nothing bad! :D

Clark...in Black... *drool* Had to do it.

And I had to include something embarrassing at the end! XD No one's heard from the Cap or Tony, so...yeah, now we ALL know what they're doing! And how they're doing it. lol

^_^ Ecstatic that you enjoyed it so! Yes, next post is this weekend. Hopefully. (woooooork is evil)

Reply


northern_star June 19 2009, 05:29:48 UTC
I'm seriously tipsy, so comments are not likely to make sense... btu HEEEEEEEE!!! THEY KISSED!! :D :D :D

I'm really looking forward to more. :D

I am seriously loving this!! THANK YOU!!

Reply

kittymayhem June 19 2009, 16:19:58 UTC
*laughs* Oh god...I think I read something about that drink you had. I'll go back and comment on that later.

But Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! I got them to kiss! Finally!! XD It only took me seven chapters! I new record for moi!

More will be posted this weekend! (providing work stops being evil)

*bounces excitedly* I'm glad you're loving it so!

Reply


anonymous July 2 2009, 04:14:34 UTC
Here's some late reactions.

"They thought of each other, and of others, and vowed to become better men for the ones they cared for if there was nothing else to scrape from this mess."

Oooooooo.

"He wasn’t exactly in his Superman attire, so he delayed swooping in to get a better reading on where she was."

Silly man are you trying to be caught?

"Her laughter was joined by another man…and his laughter was full of content."

Content = contentment???

Poor Clark.

"Batman needed Superman as much as Bruce needed Clark right now. He’d asked for him for sometime…but he’d been too blind and caught up in playing husband that he didn’t see the darkness that had settled on Bruce’s heart."

Yes you silly man. Love you still. Fix Bruce's heart or make it less sad please.

" He’d signed it.

It was actually over."

Eeee.

"“He needs me…” she whispered, repeating the three simple words written on that paper."

Yes he does.

"She really didn’t want to know…because the best person had won inevitably. Even after asking Bruce to stay his distance, ( ... )

Reply


anonymous July 3 2009, 02:57:57 UTC
aww...I love this serious its so cute angsty and funny all in one - I can't so wait for the next chapter, I do hope it is a fablous as the last ones

Reply


Leave a comment

Up