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The Complexity of Carnal Knowledge, Chapter 3

Sep 28, 2010 22:37

Title: The Complexity of Carnal Knowledge
Disclaimer: JKR owns anything that is obviously hers. I own the rest. I do not make any money off this.
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Others
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Humour, Romance, Smut
Story Warnings: Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Mild Kink, Mild ( Read more... )

genre: angst, warning: profanity, warning: threesome, genre: humour, character: ron, fic: the complexity of carnal knowledge, genre: romance, character: other, warning: psychological trauma, warning: mild kink, character: harry, genre: smut, rating: nc-17, character: draco, era: post hogwarts, warning: mild violence, genre: drama, pairing: draco/hermione, length: chaptered, character: hermione, warning: sexual situations, warning: polyjuice, warning: ewe?

Comments 21

scifichick774 September 28 2010, 23:08:50 UTC

I find it tremendously entertaining that Draco's the slightly repressed one in this fic. It's a dynamic you just don't come across often, and usually when you do, it's not done right. You've pulled it off and made it totally believable. Nicely done.

akashathekitty September 28 2010, 23:13:41 UTC

Thank you ♥

I honestly like writing repressed!Draco a lot. :D

kayoko September 28 2010, 23:33:02 UTC

It's been a while since I've been so excited about a Dramione story! I had to go back and reread from the beginning cause my memory is made of fail, but it was just as good this time around. I loved the scene where Hermione walks in on Draco wanking. It's interesting that Draco didn't seem to unconsciously wank to Hermione (good in that we avoid that cliche). I love how they're learning to see each other from another perspective.

Thanks for the update!

akashathekitty September 28 2010, 23:40:42 UTC

It's been months since my last update. Sorry about that. Got sidetracked by RL and the Reverse Challenge on H&V, but now I'm back! :D

It was very consciously that I chose he shouldn't be thinking about her. IDK, that just seemed too easy. :)

bluebear_74 September 29 2010, 03:30:01 UTC

Tehe deep deep deep DEEP down, Draco wants the Hermione to be with her :P

I love prude Draco, and getting all embarrassed at Hermione catching him.

akashathekitty September 30 2010, 00:39:46 UTC

Hahahaha, very, very, VERY deep down... maybe. ;)

Isn't he just cute when he blushes? *pinches Draco's cheek* (not saying which one)

bluebear_74 September 30 2010, 00:43:45 UTC

ALL FOUR!..?

akashathekitty September 30 2010, 00:52:14 UTC

Well, I didn't want any one cheek to feel neglected...

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akashathekitty September 30 2010, 00:40:10 UTC

Thank you. =) Making Draco blush is always worth it. ;D

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akashathekitty September 30 2010, 00:42:43 UTC

Hahaha. Yeah, I'm behind over at GE. Just catching up with my posting. =)

Yay, gushing! :D

I really enjoy writing Hermione as confident, I can't even tell you how much I enjoy that. I mean, don't get me wrong, I think she often has some level of confidence, but to write her as being completely confident in all of her abilities... that's a nice feeling! And Draco blushing... it's totally my new kink. ;)