Pure Depravity (5/5)

May 21, 2010 07:09

Title: Pure Depravity
Disclaimer: JKR owns anything that is obviously hers. I own the rest.
Characters: Blaise Zabini, Daphne Greengrass, Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson, Tracey Davis
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Dubious Consent, Sexual Situations, Skeevy Relationship Dynamics
Overall Rating: NC-17
Summary: Pansy ( Read more... )

genre: angst, genre: romance, warning: skeevy, warning: dub-con, character: daphne, genre: smut, rating: nc-17, character: draco, character: tracey, genre: drama, fic: pure depravity, pairing: blaise/pansy, finished, length: chaptered, character: hermione, warning: sexual situations, character: blaise, character: pansy

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meganmurphy1977 May 22 2010, 14:01:27 UTC
But... no sex for years?

Unless, of course, he could seduce her into initiating it.

That would be a fun game.

He smirked to himself. The very possibilities...

I love that Blaise is being all sweet and honest and wearing his heart on his sleeve and then bam! All sexy and Slytherin. Love. Him!

This was fantastic! I was really worried towards the end because I couldn't figure out if they would end up together. Watching Pansy hold it together when everything fell apart was great, but having her get back to full strength and spirit when negotiating with Blaise made me happy for her. I have hope for these two. (The Draco and Hermione in this story, though, may not work out in my opinion.)

This reminds me a lot of In the Darkness. Not plotwise, but reading the summary and the notes and the warnings, you think it's going to be all smutty but there is so much more emotion and so much more going on. Hot yes, but you are able to make me fall in love with these characters...even when they're being all Slytherin-y. You rock and I ( ... )

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akashathekitty May 22 2010, 15:07:33 UTC
Blaise is totally my go-to sexy slytherin. :D Someone called him "devious with a heart" and I like that description! XD

Bwahahaha, I love how people are always nervous about my endings. :D I have to be honest and say that I never meant for this story to in any way be a moral tale or a story about how Pansy regains her power and independence and whatever, but when it came time to write the ending, I realized that I had to give her some autonomy back or it would just be kinda depressing. :S ( ... )

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akashathekitty May 22 2010, 15:11:47 UTC
Thank you very much! :D And appreciating your icon as well. XD *Arthur fangirls a little*

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charry_lover16 May 22 2010, 23:03:23 UTC
I liked this story very much! Well done, you! And thank you for writing Blaise properly, as JKR described, not a long haired and pale skinned boy. You've also certainly sparked an interest in Blaise/Pansy stories for me, so thanks! I needed a new 'ship to crave!lol

Twocanz

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akashathekitty May 23 2010, 09:15:49 UTC
Thank you! :D

Yeah, white!Blaise is a pet peeve for me too. His hair can be long, for all I care, but he's black, dammit. XD

I don't actually know how much Blaise/Pansy fic there is. Most fic I know of with either one has e.g. Blaise/Hermione or Pansy/Harry... or Blaise/Pansy is just a background ship. But I hope you find some good Blaise/Pansy if you're going to search for it. :)

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akashathekitty May 24 2010, 20:56:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm so happy you'd give it a chance even though it's not your ship. ^_^ And it totally paid off for me to include D/Hr ;D

Aww thanks. Haha, we'll see if that day ever comes. :D

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akashathekitty May 24 2010, 21:07:15 UTC
Heeh. Pansy did kinda kick ass and take names in a very understated way right there, didn't she? XD ( ... )

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akashathekitty May 24 2010, 21:23:58 UTC
That was another concern! That I didn't want to "fairy-tale" her out by having her end up with her One Twu Vuw who would never-ever treat her badly EVER AGAIN (of course) and... ew.

My betas suggested that she not end up with anyone at all, but tbh, that was never really an option for Pansy. She was gonna end up with SOMEONE.

I LIKE THAT YOU'RE REVIEWING ME!

I'm not reading at all. I began a couple of fics on H&V but I don't have that much time PLUS I'm actively in the process of writing and I'm afraid I'll inadvertently copy something I just read because my mind can be fairly singular like that. So I never read while I write. I'll get back to them at some point, though. ^^

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