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Playing Games (2/2)

Mar 14, 2009 00:36

Title: Playing Games (2/2)
Disclaimer: JKR owns anything that is obviously hers. I own the rest.
Characters: Albus Potter, Lily Potter, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy
Genres: Hogwarts Years, Humour, Romance, Smutless Smut
Warnings: Explicit Sexual Situations, Mild Kinks, Sexual Themes, Unrelieved Sexual Tension
Overall Rating: R
Summary: Rose ( Read more... )

genre: humour, fic: playing games, era: hogwarts years, genre: romance, status: hiatus, genre: ust, character: lily luna, warning: mild kink, genre: smutless smut, length: one-shot, character: scorpius, character: rose, pairing: rose/scorpius, genre: next-gen, character: albus severus, rating: r, status: wip, length: chaptered, warning: sexual situations

Comments 90

anonymous March 14 2009, 02:46:54 UTC

that was amazing!! i wasn't sure if i'd like the whole 'next generation' thing, but you really made it work. i love the fact that rose isn't hermione 2.0 and that scorpius isn't draco 2.0. The whole storyline is refreshing, well-written, and intriguing. I love the fact that its a faux one-shot, can't wait to read more. there isn't a single thing that i don't like about this story. Thanks for posting!

akashathekitty March 17 2009, 05:27:45 UTC

Thank you :) Yeah, I was very aware that I didn't want to do Draco/Hermione disguised as their children. I wanted to give them their own personalities. :)

I think they'll be fun to write. :D

brookiki March 14 2009, 04:32:04 UTC

Very hot! And again, the characterizations and the motivations are so interesting. It was like one giant game of chicken. Now I'm very curious about how you handled Draco and Hermione so I'm going to have to go read your other fics, even though they're very long and I really need to focus on schoolwork for the next few weeks! Not fair! :-P

Oh, and about halfway through this part, I suddenly thought "Ron would die if he knew..." :-)

akashathekitty March 17 2009, 05:30:46 UTC

A giant game of chicken? Haha. Yeah, my beta called it "spin the bottle", "truth or dare" and "seven minutes in heaven" (or something like that?) all rolled into one. XD

I call it "Kitty seriously needs to stop thinking up naughty scenarios" ;)

And Ron would totally die if he knew. I'm so going to have to bring in their parents in a future chapter once I get it going. ;)

The way I handle Draco/Hermione is probably both different and the same. Idk. In a way, I feel that these characters are very different, but in another way, I feel that there are elements that are the same as in some of my other fics. :S

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akashathekitty March 17 2009, 05:31:29 UTC

*smooch* thanks, hun! You know it means a lot to me!

And, yeah, making them Ravenclaw was a very conscious decision. I wanted to play with something new. =)

♥

gryff_slytherin March 14 2009, 04:49:44 UTC

I loved it!!! I can now understand what you mean by Smutless Smut. I, especially, like the game and I'd love to see how the board game looks like. Well, I wonder if Lamont would be upset if he wasn't invited and she accepted (that is if they're still together). You should definitely continue this when you have time. =)

akashathekitty March 17 2009, 05:33:11 UTC

Smutless Smut ftw XD

Well, there actually is one game that has quite a few of the elements here. Of course, it's not quite the same, but it has an astonishing number of the same features (and oddly enough, I didn't just rip them all off...)

gryff_slytherin March 17 2009, 17:22:03 UTC

Oh, I didn't realize there was such a game in RL...hehe. Thanks. =)

akashathekitty March 17 2009, 18:07:27 UTC

There are a few board game type of things, I looked at them when trying to construct this game. =) This one comes closer than most of them, though. Although I actually own a board game called something with senses, that's a bit like it too. It just has a different set-up with "duels" and spinning wheels to caress your partner's *blank* with your own *blank*. So, yeah, a bunch of "adult" games out there. ;)

greatestheroine March 14 2009, 14:26:00 UTC

ALL THE YUMMY GOODNESS!!!!

Wow. Just WOW.

Brilliant, well played... excellent! I know you've said that it may take some time before this gets updated and I can assure you that I will be one very patient girl awaiting for the installment of this "faux" one-shot of yours :)

Kitty!!!! *does some cheerdance*

akashathekitty March 17 2009, 05:34:51 UTC

The yum is yum :D

Notice how Rose can hardly stop salivating at the yum that is him alone *grins* I always wanted to do a pretty boy...

Eh. Write a pretty boy, I meant. Honestly!

I am very glad you enjoyed it. =)

greatestheroine March 18 2009, 16:24:19 UTC

"Notice how Rose can hardly stop salivating at the yum that is him alone *grins* I always wanted to do a pretty boy...

Eh. Write a pretty boy, I meant. Honestly!

ROFL!!!!!! KITTY!!!!! You're hilarious!!!! :D

Well... maybe I want... both? mwahahahahaha!!!! :))