Comments | kittyblackcat: Lure fic again!!! (what can I say I'm a fan)

kittyblackcat

Lure fic again!!! (what can I say I'm a fan)

Sep 23, 2010 18:42

Title: I want to be alone with you
Disclaimer: do I really need to go in a bitter monologue over the stupidity of ATWT's ending again? Don't own it people!
Rating: Nc-17 (warning!!!)
Summary: Post May 28 episode. What if Noah hadn't been there, and Luke didn't stop the kiss. ( basically a plot? what plot?)

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luke/reid, atwt, fan fiction, lure

Comments 6

murgy31 September 24 2010, 04:34:20 UTC

OMG!!!! That was amazing! I think you should definitely write more NC-17. You are great at it.

kittyblackcat September 24 2010, 18:51:36 UTC

Oh WOW! Thank you! When I first wrote this I almost didn't post it at all because I thought it would be horrible, but I had positive reviews on Lure community. Still, I'm really super happy that you liked it and think I should do more. I haven't been able to be inspire to write another one yet but I am hoping I'll be able to.

Also, Thank you so much for commenting! When I posted it yesterday, I thought for sure no one was gonna read it on my journal, but you did, so I'm really, really happy! Thanks!

marsabi September 24 2010, 19:49:25 UTC

Wow! That was hot. I agree about Noah not wanting to do too much (that is what it always seemed like). Poor Luke - this is what should have happened that day!

kittyblackcat September 24 2010, 22:20:09 UTC

Thank you!!!! your and murgy31's comments just made my day!!!! I now have a HUGE smile on my face thanks to you!!! I'm so surprised ppl read this on my journal...surprised and happy! I'm glad you found my version of Noah believable. I've known him(and the other characters) only since Reid arrived to cure Noah, so sometimes I worry I might be a little too OOC with characters,so I was glad you see Noah this way too! Thanks for reviewing!!!

ddub0558 October 24 2010, 04:07:30 UTC

Just found your story and really enjoyed it. I would have never guessed it was your first time writing a sex scene. You're a natural!!!

traciamc February 4 2012, 00:42:30 UTC

Since you posted the continuation of your other story, I started to troll your journal and found this. I don't know why I never saw it before, but holy good God! That was incredibly hot! This is what SHOULD have happened on the damn show! That whole scene in Yo's where Luke tells Noah he wants him back was completely ridiculous! Grrr....it still pisses me off even now! Actually, pretty much everything the idiot writers did after that pissed me off. OK - I'm done ranting.

I loved it!