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Inception fic: Justement, Je Regrette Les Zombies (11/14)

Apr 01, 2011 20:04

Title: Justement, Je Regrette Les Zombies (11/14)
Fandom/Pairing: Inception, Arthur/Eames, Ariadne/Fischer
Overall Rating: PG-13
Overall Warnings: Language, violence, character un-death
Wordcount: 4,049
Notes: So sorry I didn't post last week! I got a little behind...okay a lot behind on my editing. So, here's the next chapter! I have never ( Read more... )

inception:fic, arthur/eames, zombies, fic, inception

Comments 8

fae_boleyn April 2 2011, 01:17:30 UTC

It's sensible for as few of them to stay as necessary, so I can't knock any of them but Nash, because he doesn't have to be a bastard about it. That much is just him.

*hugs Cobb and Eames* Poor guys. Arthur and Mal are unaware, but the two of them... God. I can't even imagine.

kittie_gurl57 April 2 2011, 16:25:17 UTC

NASH. I hate him. So, I make him a weasel and a slime-ball. Because he sucks.

Yeah. But torturing them is so much fun!

iantosgal April 2 2011, 01:27:47 UTC

Brilliant chapter bb! When Arthur said "Darling" my heart actually broke! Can't wait for more xx

kittie_gurl57 April 2 2011, 16:24:08 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm so happy you liked the "Darling" part. That was fun to write. :)

red_rahl April 2 2011, 04:29:25 UTC

Guh, your storytelling is amazing!!! It nevers fails to pull me in and by the end of each chapter, the world around me has greyed and gotten that bit more desperate! The lighter clicking was ALL kinds of creepy, especially when we realized the source and Dear Heavens, Arthur and then Mal!

Eames's dream...oh gawd, that was so horrific. Your zombies are among the most frightening but also with that very faint glimmer of hope *cheers on Yusuf* and I am just so invested in this!

The discussion about going to New York was refreshingly civilized (well, except for Nash) and I'm glad that Ariadne and Fischer will be together.

So excited for next week and I really am loving this (just in case, you know, you didn't notice). XD

kittie_gurl57 April 2 2011, 16:23:19 UTC

Thanks so much! Hooray for sucking you into my story world! And I love me some Mal. ;)

I really enjoyed writing Eames's dream. Though my beta never failed to crack up when she read the line about the half-eaten waiter and Arthur's gentlemanly dabbing at his mouth. ...I'm not sure why. xD Also Yusuf = A BOSS.

Personally, I'm not a big fan of New York. Too big a city for me. But hey, if they want to go there, they can go if they want. ;)

Thank you so much, darling!

dreams_landing April 2 2011, 07:16:45 UTC

Like red rahl said the lighter clicking was uber creepy and Eames' dreams! GOD, they're so heart breaking and amazing at the same time. and I LOVE how the zombies are acting and developing, communicating with each other, being all clever and going after their loved ones, it's so creepy and exciting, i've read nothing quite like this.

You write and are telling this story SO WELL, this is just awesome. I have so MUCH love for this story, and as always i can't WAIT for the next chapter!

kittie_gurl57 April 2 2011, 16:19:36 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm really happy you liked this chapter. I liked putting the lighter in there, because I know I get freaked out when there's an unknown sound in my house, so I can't imagine it during the zombie apocalypse. D:

I have so much love for YOU, you wonderful person. Thank you.