This was amazing. I really don't know how you do it! You create whole worlds with such few words and draw the reader in. You write DBSK characters so well, it's insane. And I really really want to know what happens!!
What an interesting storyline! Your HoMin is always so amazing <3<3<3 I just hope there is a happy ending for these two. Whenever the odds seem so stacked against love, I always wish the hardest for love to succeed in this situation. I can't wait to read where you take this story. Thanks for writing <3
I AM CURRENTLY ABOUT TO HYPERVENTILATE AT HOW AMAZING THIS IS ADSLFKJPWOIADSFKJL
i love it I LOVE IT I LOVE IIIIIIIIT I LOVE IT OMG I LOVE IT ADSFKJSDF I CAN'T SAY IT ENOUGH. there will be more, please? yes? DO I HEAR A YES?
“The angels.”
OH MY GOD MY HEART LEPT INTO MY THROAT AND I WAS LIKE ASDFJPASDIJDAF HOW COULD YOU HOW COULD YOU YOU FUCKING WINGED CREATURES and this fic totally took me back to kuroshitsuji/black butler and omfg i love the fantastical element THIS IS SO NEIL GAIMAN adflkjpweoaifjsadif
i am a rambling mess of incoherent omg please make this a verse and dabble in it every so often once the urge claims you, okay? :')))) god, i love you so much. you're so wonderful. i just...yeah, okay, enough creepy love from me I LOVE YOU okay really i'm done now dies.
please, please tell me there is a continuation to this somewhere. or at least somehow let me bribe you into continuing this.
i love the fantasy element in this, the fact that they're it's such a forbidden relationship and what i love even more is that you skipped the whole falling in love process and went right to them being discovered because after all, isn't that when all the drama and action and angst takes place? skfjgnksh
gah, so short D: too short. i love what you did with the words though. your fics aren't lengthy but you know how to use words and it's always just the placement of one or two that make the sentences and therefore the fic, so great.
Yunho's beautiful white wings hadn't just been cut from his back, they'd been ripped from his body.fucking >: ll i'll kill em if changmin can't. seriously, i'll just somehow manage to get a gun or something :( i hope yunho doesn't die
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You would.
I don't know which direction I'll go with it. We'll see. I still have several other stories that need attention. ^_^;;
As for who? I know exactly who did it.
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I hope you continue this! Poor Yunho
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I just hope there is a happy ending for these two. Whenever the odds seem so stacked against love, I always wish the hardest for love to succeed in this situation.
I can't wait to read where you take this story. Thanks for writing <3
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MY.
GOD.
I AM CURRENTLY ABOUT TO HYPERVENTILATE AT HOW AMAZING THIS IS ADSLFKJPWOIADSFKJL
i love it I LOVE IT I LOVE IIIIIIIIT I LOVE IT OMG I LOVE IT ADSFKJSDF I CAN'T SAY IT ENOUGH. there will be more, please? yes? DO I HEAR A YES?
“The angels.”
OH MY GOD MY HEART LEPT INTO MY THROAT AND I WAS LIKE ASDFJPASDIJDAF HOW COULD YOU HOW COULD YOU YOU FUCKING WINGED CREATURES and this fic totally took me back to kuroshitsuji/black butler and omfg i love the fantastical element THIS IS SO NEIL GAIMAN adflkjpweoaifjsadif
i am a rambling mess of incoherent omg please make this a verse and dabble in it every so often once the urge claims you, okay? :')))) god, i love you so much. you're so wonderful. i just...yeah, okay, enough creepy love from me I LOVE YOU okay really i'm done now dies.
♥ i love you
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i love the fantasy element in this, the fact that they're it's such a forbidden relationship and what i love even more is that you skipped the whole falling in love process and went right to them being discovered because after all, isn't that when all the drama and action and angst takes place? skfjgnksh
gah, so short D: too short. i love what you did with the words though. your fics aren't lengthy but you know how to use words and it's always just the placement of one or two that make the sentences and therefore the fic, so great.
Yunho's beautiful white wings hadn't just been cut from his back, they'd been ripped from his body.fucking >: ll i'll kill em if changmin can't. seriously, i'll just somehow manage to get a gun or something :( i hope yunho doesn't die ( ... )
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