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kitsuneyujji

fic: The Long Exile, chapter 12

Nov 04, 2009 22:30

Title: The Long Exile
Length: Chaptered, Chapter 12/?
Author: M_K Yujji
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama/Angst/Fantasy
Disclaimer: Though real people are used as characters, this fic bears no resemblance to Real Life and these people are not owned by me.

Notes: kenaressa is amazing.

As always, the 'ie' is a cutsey shortening, not an intended honorific, ( Read more... )

drama, romance, chaptered, fantasy, jaeho, long exile universe

Comments 9

chloe1910 November 5 2009, 07:18:35 UTC

Damn...that was real cool..So Yunho has wings. Ah, We are very sure now that Yunho is the king himself but in a human body....

I am still wondering why are they after Jaejoong. What do they want from Jaejong actually? Does Jaejoong actually has some amazing power that theyare trying to tap into????

kitsuneyujji November 5 2009, 07:41:44 UTC

^_^

I'm glad you liked it. I was a little worried that the whole action scene would just suck horribly and that nothing would make sense.

chloe1910 November 5 2009, 07:59:07 UTC

Yes, I like it a lot. Very exciting. actually, I was hoping that the knock on his head might actually trigger Jae to regain his past life memories fully....well, I know you have everything planned :)

kitsuneyujji November 5 2009, 08:05:35 UTC

All I can say is~ The End draws near. ^_^

agnetalovek November 5 2009, 11:34:01 UTC

yay update. Jae must figur everything out now!

kattan69 November 5 2009, 11:38:26 UTC

So that's how the dark side got Jae...he crossed the lake. Can't wait to find out how did they use Jae to create chaos in the kingdom leading to his punishment.

But then why are 'they' still interested in taking Jae back now that he is out of that realm.

Also the truth is out....only to us readers....about the real identity of Yunho. So he is the king...he must have gone to earth to be with his love. And of course, this will explain how Yunho was able to rescue Jae always in the nick of time.

This is so exciting and I love this fic....^-^

emeraud_hero November 11 2009, 18:50:51 UTC

wah! an update. yaay!!

dreaming_col December 10 2009, 07:22:14 UTC

Okay, just found this fic, and.... nyah. Ohmygosh. Can't really think of anything better to say. You've got me soooooooo hooked right now. I can not WAIT to see what happens next. Are Jae and Yunho gonna be the only two to... become what they used to be, for lack of a better description.... ? Or are the other three gonna remember or whatever, too, eventually?

Oooh, I hope you update soon. Like, soon-soon. *nods* ^^